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where the seagull dies stringless origami cries loneliness of soul koi fish suffocate colors fade in Bonsai trees island in distress words not understood shadows grin tricks on rice walls tsunamis in eyes geisha of the world love is lost in illusions freedom is her dream men with cold fingers whither blossom of her spring harakiri end in the seagull's grave origami secrets kept chicks learn how to fly www.scripca.com

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Date: 2/25/2011 6:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the seventh place win inn the contest of debbie, Iolanda
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Date: 2/25/2011 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Iolanda in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/24/2011 5:06:00 PM
I like them all but LOVE the last two.. great job. Congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:54:00 PM
wow, Iolands, these are great examples of haiku. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/23/2011 9:18:00 PM
Many congrats Iolanda on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 2/23/2011 8:04:00 PM
So beautiful and such lovely images. many congrats.
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Date: 2/23/2011 10:52:00 AM
Wonderful string of Haikus here! Congrats iolanda on your win in the contest of Debbie!---kashinath
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:12:00 AM
What a pleasure to read this profound gem,Well deserved win dear friend!
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win. Wishing you a belated Happy Birthday. Hope your day was great. Love Phyl
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:02:00 AM
very nice congrats on your win and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/8/2010 3:28:00 AM
You sure got some awesome haiku over here, Iolanda :)! Enjoyed reading this profound series of yours-- wonderful take on the challenge-- btw I especially liked that last haiku of yours-- Congrats on your win and bleated happy birthday hugs to you again :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/5/2010 8:28:00 PM
Some of the most profound ones I've read. A few reminded me of that Geisha girl movie from several years ago. Congrats, Iolanda. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:45:00 PM
Iolanda, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun running this contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:41:00 PM
lovely haikus, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in P.D.'s contest *Going Haiku Crazy*. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Iolanda
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Date: 9/30/2010 4:25:00 AM
Imi place ca ai folosit cuvinte din cultura japoneza:origami, Bonsai, geisha, harakiri. Si eu sunt pasionata de cultura lor si chiar fac cursuri de limba japoneza de un an(stiu sa scriu si sa citesc cat de cat). O poezie foarte frumoasa si trista, in acelasi timp. Mult succes in concurs, draga Iolanda. Cu drag, Emilia:)
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Date: 9/27/2010 1:26:00 PM
Fantastic Haiku, filled with beautiful imagery. Love the Japanese art of origami, Iolanda. Picture perfect! Best of luck with this beauty! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/27/2010 7:58:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your poetry Iolanda. The best to you in the contest. I wish to thank you for your kind comments on my writings. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:18:00 AM
A wonderful entry of multiple haikus for the contest. Good luck, Iolanda
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Date: 9/26/2010 7:53:00 PM
IOLANDA, WOW! DEEP AND AMAZING, A WONDERFUL POEM TO READ! ( GOOD LUCK )HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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