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You were love’s surprise versed in romantic delight. Your love secured me cuddled and rapport entwined each time our hearts took time to flesh comfort align. I felt our lives were meant to fast coupledom attach in our own signature dressed, love expressed indicators. Then, time witnessed and felt our adhesiveness contort from the soul corrosion you brought and skew frothed to seal us in burdened versions of darkened emotions. I live suspended between a confused sphere retreat and a subconscious residence in Neverland’s release. ... CayCay September 8, 2019 Written for a Ten Word Challenge Must use: corrosion, signature, seal, confused, cuddled, subconscious, attach, surprise, contort, align

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Date: 9/10/2019 9:39:00 AM
I cannot believe this was written in order to utilize certain words; it flows effortlessly!
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Date: 9/8/2019 7:34:00 PM
Terrific utilization of the words---and what a killer last line. Best wishes, gw
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:14:00 PM
Great job with the words, Caycay. I know you have lots of past experience to draw on for this kind of writing! Good luck in this contest. I probably won't try.
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Date: 9/8/2019 6:56:00 AM
CayCay, this is so sad--but so realistic! Many relationships become strained, or end! Janice
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Date: 9/8/2019 12:48:00 AM
You did really great with your entry CayCay. I can think of nothing. I have a block at the moment. Best wishes for a high placement my friend. : ) xxoo
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