CayCay Godwin Poet Free verse

Burdened Versions

You were love’s surprise versed in romantic delight.
Your love secured me cuddled and rapport entwined
each time our hearts took time to flesh comfort align.
I felt our lives were meant to fast coupledom attach
in our own signature dressed, love expressed indicators.

Then, time witnessed and felt our adhesiveness contort
from the soul corrosion you brought and skewed forth 
to seal us in burdened versions of darkened emotions.
I live suspended between a confused sphere retreat
and a subconscious residence in Neverland’s release.

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Caren Krutsinger September 10, 2019 at 9:39 AM I cannot believe this was written in order to utilize certain words; it flows effortlessly!

Gershon Wolf September 8, 2019 at 7:34 PM Terrific utilization of the words---and what a killer last line. Best wishes, gw

Andrea Dietrich September 8, 2019 at 12:14 PM Great job with the words, Caycay. I know you have lots of past experience to draw on for this kind of writing! Good luck in this contest. I probably won't try.

Janice Canerdy September 8, 2019 at 6:56 AM CayCay, this is so sad--but so realistic! Many relationships become strained, or end! Janice

Connie Marcum Wong September 8, 2019 at 12:48 AM You did really great with your entry CayCay. I can think of nothing. I have a block at the moment. Best wishes for a high placement my friend. : ) xxoo