Burden

And now the time is here for me
To say my last goodbyes
Buy you shouldn’t grieve or feel a loss
For shortly, I will rise

I lay here in my hospital bed
So frail, and oh so weak
No energy to carry on
No strength left so to speak

These final, crucial hours,
The ones we spent together
Will stay in the place where they belong
That’s in my heart forever

Don’t cry for me, Don’t sob for me
Don’t walk away in fear
The time has come for me to go,
Now please don’t shed a tear

If you should come and kiss my hand
Please make it last this time
For no matter how much we pray and wish
I’ve been defeated by this crime.

- Jordan McCallum -

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 8/30/2009 5:04:00 AM
Jordan congrats on placing in Chris's contest - God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations, Jordan on your win in Christopher's contest with this outstanding write!
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:55:00 PM
Congratulations on this sad entry to Christopher's contest! Well deserving recognition! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:14:00 PM
Such a sad ending and a clear picture of a familiar experience. Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest!
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Date: 8/24/2009 8:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest Jordan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:42:00 AM
Congrats and thanks for entering.
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:46:00 PM
Love this one. Sara
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Date: 7/27/2009 6:28:00 PM
good rhymes. check out some of my poems
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:41:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Jordan. Enjoyed the read. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/27/2009 2:04:00 PM
beautiful poetry here. Really enjoyed this release you have given here, and also the rym just rocks like crazy. I also love the message. Enjoy your day and night.
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