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Bunnys Go Wiild

Two little bunnies hopped on the Ark They got up to mischief after dark It wasn't long more bunnies came along They all sang the hippy hop song We like to make love we're not about war If the ships rocking don't open the door After forty days and forty nights So many bunnies it just wasn't right Noah decided he must segregate Their appetites he could not satiate When they got hungry they ate bunny stew By the time they landed there were just two Noah's Ark Contest

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/1/2013 7:08:00 PM

Richard This is cute and creative. The reader is having fun with the bunny's mischief but then unhappy when the bunny's become the meal. Nice job

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 6/6/2013 8:17:00 PM

This is GREAT Rick!......make me laugh out loud...so funny! Hugs

Timothy Hicks

Date: 6/4/2013 12:03:00 AM

I felt so happy for the bunnies... then instantly sad when I realized where the soup came from! Very nicely down... brings new meaning to "don't rock the boat" ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/4/2013 8:56:00 AM

Ha ha, you kill me Tim. I will talk with you when I get back from Vegas

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/3/2013 9:00:00 AM

Hahaha...sounds like my kinda boat. This was a treat to read!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/3/2013 11:50:00 AM

Thanks Caleb, I hope you are having a great day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2013 3:54:00 PM

hahahaha. one of THE best I have seen in this contest and was quite the opposite of my panda couple. hahaha.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 4:51:00 PM

Thanks again Andrea you are very kind.

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 6/2/2013 10:04:00 AM

I wish I were a wabbit // please don't use me for stew // I'll keep myself busy with stuff wabbits do!! Funny and witty, Richard. I know you'll do well in the contest. Licia :-)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:53:00 PM

As of late I have not had much success, maybe the waskawy wabbit may do the trick! Thanks for all the visits today.

Colleen Bono

Date: 6/1/2013 9:15:00 PM

Only one today?your slipping.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 12:54:00 PM

Yep if I could go back to yesterday I would write you another one.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/1/2013 4:15:00 PM

great poem!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 7:15:00 AM

Thanks Funom

Donna Jones

Date: 6/1/2013 10:51:00 AM

Oh.....great one Richard!!!!!! Good luck..---

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 7:16:00 AM

Thanks Donna

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/1/2013 10:19:00 AM

- Fun to read Richard. - Luck in contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 7:16:00 AM

You as well Anne lise

Colleen Bono

Date: 6/1/2013 9:29:00 AM

cute.good luck in the contest

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/2/2013 7:17:00 AM

Thanks Colleen

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/1/2013 8:18:00 AM

OH RICHARD! BUNNY STEW???? How could you???? Those cute pretty bunnies cut in their prime....having a good time... ;) Bunnies got it right, and they get punished for it? BOO HOO HOO! Just kidding...cute poem!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2013 8:41:00 AM

I guess in the end it wasn't free love.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/1/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thanks Eileen.