Richard Lamoureux Poet Couplet

Bunnys Go Wiild

Two little bunnies hopped on the Ark
They got up to mischief after dark

It wasn't long more bunnies came along
They all sang the hippy hop song

We like to make love we're not about war
If the ships rocking don't open the door

After forty days and forty nights
So many bunnies it just wasn't right

Noah decided he must segregate
Their appetites he could not satiate

When they got hungry they ate bunny stew
By the time they landed there were just two

Noah's Ark Contest

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Robin Davis November 1, 2013 at 7:08 PM Richard This is cute and creative. The reader is having fun with the bunny's mischief but then unhappy when the bunny's become the meal. Nice job

Cecilia Macfarlane June 6, 2013 at 8:17 PM This is GREAT Rick!......make me laugh out loud...so funny! Hugs

Timothy Hicks June 4, 2013 at 12:03 AM I felt so happy for the bunnies... then instantly sad when I realized where the soup came from! Very nicely down... brings new meaning to "don't rock the boat" ;) Richard Lamoureux June 4, 2013 at 8:56 AM Ha ha, you kill me Tim. I will talk with you when I get back from Vegas

Painted Hunter June 3, 2013 at 9:00 AM Hahaha...sounds like my kinda boat. This was a treat to read! Richard Lamoureux June 3, 2013 at 11:50 AM Thanks Caleb, I hope you are having a great day.

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2013 at 3:54 PM hahahaha. one of THE best I have seen in this contest and was quite the opposite of my panda couple. hahaha. Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 4:51 PM Thanks again Andrea you are very kind.

Delysia Hendricks June 2, 2013 at 10:04 AM I wish I were a wabbit // please don't use me for stew // I'll keep myself busy with stuff wabbits do!! Funny and witty, Richard. I know you'll do well in the contest. Licia :-) Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 12:53 PM As of late I have not had much success, maybe the waskawy wabbit may do the trick! Thanks for all the visits today.

Colleen Bono June 1, 2013 at 9:15 PM Only one today?your slipping. Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 12:54 PM Yep if I could go back to yesterday I would write you another one.

Funom Makama June 1, 2013 at 4:15 PM great poem! Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 7:15 AM Thanks Funom

Donna Jones June 1, 2013 at 10:51 AM Oh.....great one Richard!!!!!! Good luck..--- Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 7:16 AM Thanks Donna

Anne-Lise Andresen June 1, 2013 at 10:19 AM - Fun to read Richard. - Luck in contest! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 7:16 AM You as well Anne lise

Colleen Bono June 1, 2013 at 9:29 AM cute.good luck in the contest Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2013 at 7:17 AM Thanks Colleen

Eileen Manassian June 1, 2013 at 8:18 AM OH RICHARD! BUNNY STEW???? How could you???? Those cute pretty bunnies cut in their prime....having a good time... ;) Bunnies got it right, and they get punished for it? BOO HOO HOO! Just kidding...cute poem! Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2013 at 8:41 AM I guess in the end it wasn't free love. Richard Lamoureux June 1, 2013 at 8:20 AM Thanks Eileen.