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Bungalow

I’m falling, falling for you, entangled in your crisp and shapeliness, newfangled light and heaviness. Underneath I hide the quiver of my chin, where smiles reside. Innocence plays upon my lips, cerise, the color of the maple, of Maurice — you see i try to please all of my friends, too many to count, to many attend. I used to climb each limb - each branch and lean into the lemonshine, the ground unseen. The scent of caramel, burnt sugar, spice. Nay - likely ice-cold rain and paradise. The frond is gone, the hoar frost near of heart. The soar, light whip of float - the eye in part travels with wind and scent. The boa wrap, variegated color — I take a nap. Snow-white bungalow - an arctic igloo. I must be rescued - ash soot up the flue. Serendipity through the heap. I’d been dreaming - up through the leaves I leap. 8/3/2021 An interesting Couplet Sponsor: Funom Makama
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Koplin Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 10:40 AM
The great awakening. Well done Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 5, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thank you, Mark!
Wolf Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 3:50 PM
I was ready to consign you and the leave to the 'hoarfrost' there, and up that surprise ending popped. Wonderful write, Kim. ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 5:35 PM
Glad it came as a surprise! I don’t delve into these long poems too much. Thank you, dear friend!
Cunningham Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 2:39 PM
Well written Kim, you woke in the nick of time. Good luck in the contest Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 3:38 PM
So right…lol…thanks, Tom!
Andresen Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 11:33 AM
- Great written, Kim :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 1:16 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Buhagiar Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Your couplets are certainly interesting Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 3, 2021 at 10:46 AM
Thank you, Victor <3
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