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Bundle of Joy

   "BUNDLE OF JOY"



blue eyes blink new life
coos and goos speak from sweet mouth
pink cheeks blush with warmth
happiness for parents proud
thanking God for cry so loud.


*For Black-Eyed Susan's Tanks Contest
*Oct. 3, 2012  

Copyright © Linda-Marie Sweetheart | Year Posted 2012

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Skat A Date: 3/13/2014 2:55:00 AM a sweet bundle... SKAT Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/15/2012 2:29:00 AM feeling giddy with your mood and laguagem sweet... BIG congrats..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 10/14/2012 4:17:00 AM Big congrats from Spain xx Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 10/13/2012 10:07:00 PM I can hear the baby's coos. well done Lee Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/12/2012 9:05:00 AM WON 2ND PLACE .. THANKXXX Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 10/12/2012 7:42:00 AM Such A lovely Tanka here Linda!Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Modupe Sefunmi Date: 10/12/2012 2:48:00 AM Congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2012 12:18:00 AM yes, a very cute one. Congrats, Linda. Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 10/11/2012 11:09:00 PM Beautiful Linda, Many congrats on this win. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 10/11/2012 10:41:00 PM Did you have a new baby in the family? They do keep coming. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/11/2012 10:33:00 PM beautiful poem about a new blessing, cute little baby...congratulations on your win :) hugs Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/11/2012 6:43:00 PM this is just lovely! congratulations on your win and on the new baby in your life! Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 10/11/2012 3:23:00 PM Very nice pivote at the end of line 3 [by jove I think you've got it!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 10/11/2012 3:16:00 PM Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 10/11/2012 12:39:00 PM A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Linda. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/5/2012 10:04:00 PM Linda, my bff, I'm not having trouble clicking here on the soup. I read the poem you entered in Nathan's contest. Did you write one for my contest too.. I did not see one for my contest... let me know ..xox~pd Login to Reply

Colleen Bono Date: 10/5/2012 11:50:00 AM hello.came back for a bit to post a couple new poems.take care Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 10/5/2012 5:39:00 AM lovely this is, lucky boy to have you also.... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/4/2012 1:44:00 PM very cute, Linda. I see you are basking again in the grandma status!! It's so fun to see those little babies in our lives! Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 10/4/2012 9:34:00 AM Awee... Linda my sweet bff... i love this tanka, i'm looking forward to my daughters new baby due around February... good luck in the contest..pd Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/4/2012 9:15:00 AM Yes, that cry means some strong lungs and most likely a healthy baby..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 10/4/2012 6:58:00 AM Wow, what a fully delightful and sentimental write this incredible poem is! I just love little babies, they are so cute and bring lots of joy! I know that you are the proudest grandmother Linda-Marie, and you should very well be, you deserve this my friend! This is a fantastic Tanka, I love this! I really enjoyed this great write this morning! Awesome piece, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Dan Kearley Date: 10/4/2012 2:04:00 AM I can feel the love you have to give.The sweetest of sweet...Grandparents you shall be.<3 (o: Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 10/4/2012 2:01:00 AM This sure is a winner dear Linda. I absolutely love it. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 10/4/2012 12:53:00 AM our new baby boy has brought joy and happiness to all our lives and touched us in a special way .. so enjoy poets with luv as we smother him with kisses as only Grandparents can give .. Login to Reply