Bundle of Joy

"BUNDLE OF JOY" blue eyes blink new life coos and goos speak from sweet mouth pink cheeks blush with warmth happiness for parents proud thanking God for cry so loud. *For Black-Eyed Susan's Tanks Contest *Oct. 3, 2012
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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 2:55 AM
a sweet bundle... SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 2:29 AM
feeling giddy with your mood and laguagem sweet... BIG congrats..:) huggs!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 4:17 AM
Big congrats from Spain xx
Ramage Avatar
October 13, 2012 at 10:07 PM
I can hear the baby's coos. well done Lee
Sweetheart Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 9:05 AM
WON 2ND PLACE .. THANKXXX
Poet Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 7:42 AM
Such A lovely Tanka here Linda!Congrats on your win!
Sefunmi Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 2:48 AM
Congrats on your win!
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 12:18 AM
yes, a very cute one. Congrats, Linda.
Mannan Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 11:09 PM
Beautiful Linda, Many congrats on this win.
Johnson Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 10:41 PM
Did you have a new baby in the family? They do keep coming. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Liwayway Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 10:33 PM
beautiful poem about a new blessing, cute little baby...congratulations on your win :) hugs
Bauer Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 6:43 PM
this is just lovely! congratulations on your win and on the new baby in your life!
Guzzi Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Very nice pivote at the end of line 3 [by jove I think you've got it!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Grisetti Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Brown Avatar
October 11, 2012 at 12:39 PM
A well earned congratulations on your win in Susan's "Single Tanka" contest Linda. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 10:04 PM
Linda, my bff, I'm not having trouble clicking here on the soup. I read the poem you entered in Nathan's contest. Did you write one for my contest too.. I did not see one for my contest... let me know ..xox~pd
Bono Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM
hello.came back for a bit to post a couple new poems.take care
Horsman Avatar
October 5, 2012 at 5:39 AM
lovely this is, lucky boy to have you also....
Dietrich Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 1:44 PM
very cute, Linda. I see you are basking again in the grandma status!! It's so fun to see those little babies in our lives!
A   Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:34 AM
Awee... Linda my sweet bff... i love this tanka, i'm looking forward to my daughters new baby due around February... good luck in the contest..pd
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Yes, that cry means some strong lungs and most likely a healthy baby..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Sivey Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 6:58 AM
Wow, what a fully delightful and sentimental write this incredible poem is! I just love little babies, they are so cute and bring lots of joy! I know that you are the proudest grandmother Linda-Marie, and you should very well be, you deserve this my friend! This is a fantastic Tanka, I love this! I really enjoyed this great write this morning! Awesome piece, Great Work!!
Kearley Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:04 AM
I can feel the love you have to give.The sweetest of sweet...Grandparents you shall be.<3 (o:
Mannan Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 2:01 AM
This sure is a winner dear Linda. I absolutely love it.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 12:53 AM
our new baby boy has brought joy and happiness to all our lives and touched us in a special way .. so enjoy poets with luv as we smother him with kisses as only Grandparents can give ..
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