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Have you ever just wanted to sleep while you painted eternity bright and dark, heart on your left hand slant? Have you ever wished fishbones were somehow the power to bring tenderness to the blind deaf and powerful rulers? Have you ever peed outside ass exposed but who cares cause it's really relieving the potential stench that would otherwise? Have you ever kissed your brother? Rocked your mother? Birthed your father? Talked your sister into love eternally?

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Date: 10/21/2011 9:20:00 AM
Great questions luv, each of us has a different answer. A strong verse that begs to be considered.
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Date: 10/12/2011 5:25:00 PM
Fascinating collection of questions here. Wonder what the answers are. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/11/2011 5:45:00 PM
very nice, enjoyed it....
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:28:00 PM
I like this one a lot... Although I have done only one of those, which should be left unsaid. I love reading this... Robert
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Date: 10/11/2011 11:37:00 AM
Thought provoking piece, my friend. Thanks - I really enjoyed the contest : )
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:58:00 AM
1); yes, and the poetry was just as awkward ! 2); yes, yet I found Jehovah to be the Almighty! 3); yes, but; I missed the hole and hit the ass, and flies all day stalked it ! 4); I plead the fifth, in the mix of your last stanza ! *smiles*....Fantastical write dear poet ! Have a wonderful week Nancy ! Much love, james
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Date: 10/11/2011 7:12:00 AM
wow Nancy, enjoyed this. yes to all your questions. harry
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Date: 10/11/2011 12:31:00 PM
oops, that one was meant to attach to Tony's comment below.
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Nancy Jones
Date: 10/11/2011 9:58:00 AM
know you're not talkin ta me 'cause have toldja I don't do boxes.. :D
Date: 10/11/2011 6:48:00 AM
What are you, a hippy? Tony
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Date: 10/11/2011 2:14:00 AM
You have such a creative imagination and a unique style that is well-defined, Nancy. So glad to have the opportunity to read your work here. And, yes, I once talked to my sister, kissed my brother many times on the cheek and even peed outside -- off the edge of a rock jetty over the ocean when I was in college. Ah, for those carefree days of youth! Love, Carolyn
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