Bun Plight

HASTY MATEY BABY MAYBE RAZOR LABOR DIMPLY DOLLY YOUNG POPS TONGUE FLOPS
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Brul Avatar
May 27, 2025 at 12:26 AM
Awww this is so cute!!^___^
Rodrigues Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 2:10 PM
Congrats, CayCay!
Y. Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:11 PM
Hi CayCay. This is funny..Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 1:01 PM
- This was good, CayCay :))) - Congrats on your great first place in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:55 PM
haha, Great theme you did, Caycay. Hey I MISS you, sweetie. WHere are you ? And congrats in this contest.
Allison Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 12:42 PM
Many congrats on your top spot CayCay the final footle was such a hilarious image:-) hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 5:22 PM
giggles, cay.. you sure made me smile!..huggs
Y. Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Hi CayCay, This is really funny! I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Turner Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:27 AM
"Dimply dolly" very funny, CayCay.
Sathasivam Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 6:18 AM
Great and fun write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:23 AM
So glad you enjoyed the read, Ravi - thank you for the kind comments. All the best ... CayCay
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October 27, 2016 at 4:48 AM
The title had me laughing, fun imagery, good luck CayCay! :)
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:22 AM
You look way too pretty for a time in the morn when I haven't had coffee yet. Would be funny to have pics of each poet upon waking and then after coffee/dressing. Never mind, it might be more scary than funny. Glad to have made you laugh, Paloma! I wish you all the best, all the time ... CayCay
Manassian Avatar
October 26, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Oh dear oh dear.....won't do if the tongue flops now, will it? ;) Great write, CayCay. Good luck in the contest!
Godwin Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Hey, Sweetie - I may have already told you, but compliments are worth hearing more than once: I think your new pic is extremely flattering, you look very pretty, Eileen. Yes, the footles were fun to write, love word/syllable challenges, regardless of how the poem may fare. I have not read others much lately and hope to remedy that today - I wanna come 'see' you! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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