Bumptious

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irritatingly self-assertive.

Breath sounds as loud as a gong
Ultra-aggression so young
Match this act, the bee has stung
People’s ideas, next to dung
To others, dry is their lung
Importance, made by the tongue
On the same level is wrong
Upsetting power is hung
Staying  on top is the song

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Aqua Marine

Date: 12/8/2018 2:11:00 AM

A good lesson for all of us, we cannot " know it all.." An admonition for being humble- Thank you for that... : ))) ( another fav- it's great to see your poetry again, Funom!)

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Aqua Marine...