Bummed

BUMMED

Ann delivered peaches and plumbs.
Bob could only give Ann breadcrumbs.
Ann’s fruit very sweet.
Bob’s crummy crumbs cheat.
Why does Ann’s fruit only draw bums?

7/6/2017
Limerick
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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July 6, 2017 at 10:35 AM
This was fun Kim. Hmmm...bums means one thing here in the U.S. and something altogether different in the UK. :) So this bum was sitting on his bum eating a plumb and handing out breadcrumbs.
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July 6, 2017 at 10:42 AM
That about sums it up LOL!
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