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Bumblebees Responsibilities

. Bumblebees visit Lamb's Ear Love has surely brought them here Workers are helping mother Feed all grubs pupae Contest:Flowers, Trees, Grass, Bees Sponsor: Francine Roberts Choice: Bumblebees

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James Foulk

Date: 5/25/2011 1:53:00 PM

thank you for commenting on Just a Lonely Rose.

Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/25/2011 9:40:00 AM

Well done Sara , how did you ever think of it.Do you live on a farm? Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/24/2011 9:02:00 PM

right on target with this entry Sara.. good luck in the contest.. I also wrote about bees my friend.. good luck.. with this special piece ..

James Foulk

Date: 5/24/2011 7:51:00 PM

a great piece of work by a fine poet, very well done. thank you for commenting on drops of poetry, boy i did that one a while back, thank you for taking the time to find and read it.

Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/24/2011 11:16:00 AM

A very creative dodoitsu on bumblebee..Sara, loved how you sketched this piece. Winning wishes to you in Francine's contest.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/24/2011 6:30:00 AM

Nice imagery here Sara.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/24/2011 3:35:00 AM

i like the workers in the bee kingom, sara; they are so industrious and your piece expresses this imager with such clarity and charm... wonderful!.. winning's bes tp you! :) huggs always!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2011 11:41:00 PM

I see you are doing more than one bumblebee poem today. I think this lowly insect has quite inspired you, sweetie!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 3:29:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the theme of the contest, good like, a sure winner it is. sara

Matt Hunt

Date: 5/23/2011 2:56:00 PM

I'm diggin it:) Good luck in the contest. Matt