Sara Kendrick Poet Dodoitsu

Bumblebees Responsibilities

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                                       Bumblebees visit Lamb's Ear
                                  Love has surely brought them here
                                        Workers are helping mother
                                             Feed all grubs pupae


Contest:Flowers, Trees, Grass, Bees
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Choice: Bumblebees

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James Foulk May 25, 2011 at 1:53 PM thank you for commenting on Just a Lonely Rose.

Anne Rutherford May 25, 2011 at 9:40 AM Well done Sara , how did you ever think of it.Do you live on a farm? Anne

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 24, 2011 at 9:02 PM right on target with this entry Sara.. good luck in the contest.. I also wrote about bees my friend.. good luck.. with this special piece ..

James Foulk May 24, 2011 at 7:51 PM a great piece of work by a fine poet, very well done. thank you for commenting on drops of poetry, boy i did that one a while back, thank you for taking the time to find and read it.

Gautami Phookan May 24, 2011 at 11:16 AM A very creative dodoitsu on bumblebee..Sara, loved how you sketched this piece. Winning wishes to you in Francine's contest.

Kash Poet May 24, 2011 at 6:30 AM Nice imagery here Sara.Enjoyed.Best wishes.

Nette Onclaud May 24, 2011 at 3:35 AM i like the workers in the bee kingom, sara; they are so industrious and your piece expresses this imager with such clarity and charm... wonderful!.. winning's bes tp you! :) huggs always!

Andrea Dietrich May 23, 2011 at 11:41 PM I see you are doing more than one bumblebee poem today. I think this lowly insect has quite inspired you, sweetie!!

Dr.Ram Mehta May 23, 2011 at 3:29 PM Wonderful entry to the theme of the contest, good like, a sure winner it is. sara

Matt Hunt May 23, 2011 at 2:56 PM I'm diggin it:) Good luck in the contest. Matt