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Bumblebees Responsibilities

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                                       Bumblebees visit Lamb's Ear
                                  Love has surely brought them here
                                        Workers are helping mother
                                             Feed all grubs pupae


Contest:Flowers, Trees, Grass, Bees
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
Choice: Bumblebees

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2011

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James Foulk Date: 5/25/2011 1:53:00 PM thank you for commenting on Just a Lonely Rose. Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 5/25/2011 9:40:00 AM Well done Sara , how did you ever think of it.Do you live on a farm? Anne Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/24/2011 9:02:00 PM right on target with this entry Sara.. good luck in the contest.. I also wrote about bees my friend.. good luck.. with this special piece .. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 5/24/2011 7:51:00 PM a great piece of work by a fine poet, very well done. thank you for commenting on drops of poetry, boy i did that one a while back, thank you for taking the time to find and read it. Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 5/24/2011 11:16:00 AM A very creative dodoitsu on bumblebee..Sara, loved how you sketched this piece. Winning wishes to you in Francine's contest. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/24/2011 6:30:00 AM Nice imagery here Sara.Enjoyed.Best wishes. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/24/2011 3:35:00 AM i like the workers in the bee kingom, sara; they are so industrious and your piece expresses this imager with such clarity and charm... wonderful!.. winning's bes tp you! :) huggs always! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/23/2011 11:41:00 PM I see you are doing more than one bumblebee poem today. I think this lowly insect has quite inspired you, sweetie!! Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/23/2011 3:29:00 PM Wonderful entry to the theme of the contest, good like, a sure winner it is. sara Login to Reply

Matt Hunt Date: 5/23/2011 2:56:00 PM I'm diggin it:) Good luck in the contest. Matt Login to Reply