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BumbleBee Business

Busy bumblebees hard at work.
Skimming from one enticing flower to another
Wild fragrant blooms induce intoxication.
Bees get dizzy by end of day.



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Copyright © Line Gauthier | Year Posted 2019

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Andrea Dietrich

June 22, 2019 at 7:00 PM

Oh, yes, I remember this one and how cute it is . Congrats for the win

June 22, 2019 at 10:59 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

June 22, 2019 at 6:14 AM

I so love this! Bees dissy at work. Congrats, Line.

June 22, 2019 at 7:46 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Jeanne.

June 22, 2019 at 4:03 AM

Dear Line, bees dizzy ! imagine us with all this fragrance around... Lovely words, make me remember one of my poems here,,, the one you suggested me some change... it was about bees too. Have a nice weekend ! salute alkas

June 22, 2019 at 7:47 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Alkas.

June 22, 2019 at 2:57 AM

Many congrats on your beautiful win Line. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

June 22, 2019 at 7:47 AM

Thanks, Ann. Much appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

June 22, 2019 at 1:00 AM

Wonderful! Love "bees dizzy at work"

June 22, 2019 at 7:47 AM

Thanks, Timothy. Much appreciated.

June 21, 2019 at 7:59 PM

Fine haiku, Line! Congrats on your win! :)

June 21, 2019 at 8:47 PM

Thanks, Laura. Much appreciated.

June 21, 2019 at 7:03 PM

Line, congratulations on your winning placement with this lovely haiku with beautiful imagery, enjoyed!

June 21, 2019 at 8:47 PM

Thanks, Tania. Much appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

June 21, 2019 at 6:38 AM

"bees dizzy at work" - delightful! Brings the buzzing word to mind, without saying it. Highly clever, Line.

June 21, 2019 at 7:52 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Panagiota Romios

June 20, 2019 at 2:30 PM

Delightful Haiku for this time of year. My best to you in this contest Panagiota

June 20, 2019 at 7:30 PM

Thank you, Panagiota. Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2019 at 10:05 PM

cute play on busy!!!

June 20, 2019 at 6:55 AM

Thanks, Andrea. Much appreciated.

June 19, 2019 at 7:56 PM

Lovely!

June 19, 2019 at 9:13 PM

Thank you, Kim. Much appreciated.

June 18, 2019 at 9:33 PM

Love that twist, Line: 'Bees dizzy at work.' Nicely done. G.L. in the contest. Should do well, methinks. Best wishes, Gershon

June 18, 2019 at 10:03 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Most appreciated.

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