Bumblebee - Ah

beside babbling brook 
bloomed beautiful bluebonnets ~
bumblebee buzzing


Alliterku Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina
Date written: 02/27/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 9:48 AM
- Congratulations, with yours buzzing ku Edward :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 8:13 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. Wonderful "B" words~write. Have a blessed Sunday....................
Fowler Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 6:32 AM
Ah, sweet bluebonnets. My State's flower :) Nice Edward. :) Congratulations on your win! :)
Messina Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:34 AM
Very nicely done, Edward. Congratulations on your placement! ~Charlie
Ibeh Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 5:07 AM
Thank you very much for the congratulations and my placement, Charles:-)
Seeker Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 10:07 PM
Makes for a peaceful environ ~ lovely write, Edward, congratulations on your win
Ibeh Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-)
Dietrich Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 9:43 PM
Such a cute one. Congrats.
Ibeh Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 5:05 AM
Thank you, Andrea!:-)
Sambourne Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 10:02 AM
A grand image of nature. Bees, flowers, + a chattering brook - all nicely meshed together in your Haiku. Congratulations! Brian
Ibeh Avatar
March 4, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Thank you very much, Brian:-) Most appreciated.
Daniel Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 9:56 PM
I like this one, Edward, gonna be tough for Charlie to choose, every single one is appealing:)
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 5:18 AM
Thank you very much, Jo:-) I'm glad you liked it.
Goldsmith Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 2:29 PM
A lovely story in just 3 lines. Have a great day...........
Ibeh Avatar
February 28, 2023 at 7:33 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-)
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