Sara Kendrick Poet Blitz

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Bulbs Among Sustainers

Set some goals
Set out bulbs
Bulbs planted in garden
Bulbs planted in beds
Beds filled with blooms
Beds are warm
Warm days bring flowers
Warm beds rest
Rest equals health
Rest for weary
Weary souls faint
Weary hearts mourn
Mourn love lost
Mourn departed
Departed is gloom
Departed is pressure
Pressure creates diamonds
Pressure can explode
Explode from anger
Explode from dynamite
Dynamite dangerous
Dynamite has use
Use has purpose
Use for things
Things for jobs
Things are inventions
Inventions make life easy
Inventions save time
Time passes by
Time is rationed
Rationed are minutes
Rationed are seconds
Seconds make minutes
Seconds compose life
Life is good
Life is granted
Granted are your days
Granted each year
Year makes lifetime
Year make one old
Old people die
Old people get weak
Weak seek God 
Weak need help
Help comes from God 
Help is a sustainer
Sustainers keep going
Sustainers are awesome
Awesome
Going     

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Regina Elliott February 3, 2024 at 10:22 AM Wow, a big FAVE, Sara. You've crafted your words so well for this fine blitz poem. If this is for Silent One's contest, my very best wishes for the contest. A fine contender for it. Many blessings to you and your's. ~ Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 12:56 PM I am honored you would fav it, Regina. I appreciate the high praise. Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Sara K

Anisha Dutta February 3, 2024 at 8:17 AM Easy flow. Nice to read. Sure to win. Love. Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 9:58 AM Thank you, Anisha. It is not for the contest but thank you. Sara K

Ink Empress February 3, 2024 at 4:10 AM Wow you did this form so well dear sara, i love it! It flows just seamlessly with so many thoughts phrased in the most captivating manner, i love warm days bring flowers and also the ending, yes weak seek Faith and also need help. How creative and soulful is every line in this. Im sure this will do very well in the contest, pleasure reading your work. Sendin you light always Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 6:52 AM IE, not for the contest or at least I don't think I put it in there. LOL..I will have to look and see if I did. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Howard Kerr February 3, 2024 at 1:51 AM Hi Sara, This is an exemplary Blitz. It is plausible, pleasing, and pertinent. Wondrous flow and equally wonderful word deployment. Howard Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 6:51 AM Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the kind review. I am going to try writing another one. Sara K

Yann Rolland February 3, 2024 at 12:16 AM between bulbs and dynamite only a poet can cross the line, this si wonderful and touching, thanks poet Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 12:44 AM Far fetched. LOL..Thank you, Yann. Sara K

Bill Baker February 2, 2024 at 4:46 PM Awesome poetry, Sara. I've never seen this form before, but it looks like fun to write this way. Thanks for sharing the form with us. I bet some others give it a try. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Sara Kendrick February 3, 2024 at 12:43 AM Well, Bill, it was not so easy. You are really supposed to write it fast and not give it any thought, but sometimes nothing comes and you have to give it thought. LOL..I guess age. Thanks for dropping by. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar February 2, 2024 at 9:15 AM Brilliant. I like most the idea that God helps us. Sara Kendrick February 2, 2024 at 1:35 PM Yes, He does mostly in the form of other people. Thanks for the visit. Sara K