BUILDINGS IN the SNOW

Buildings blue
pink, yellow, orange
and white in
a row, and it is
snowing.

At midnight
they seem to hover
in the dark,
and snow glows
in the sky
and on the ground.

No telling
if they are all alone.
Perhaps,
they are facing
neighbors.

The blue building,
teal and curtain-less,
abandoned,
and yet freshly painted.

The pink house
is decorated
with pretty lights
in swag fashion.

An orange church
is between
the pastel yellow
and large white home.

Its windows are stained
in saintly colors; its steeple
like praying hands.

The windows seem to twinkle.
And the steeple invites
those who find themselves
in the darkness; and
the lights are
on the verge of welcome.

We know nothing
of the townsfolk.
They are sleeping
as the pleasant snow,
fluffy white
hides its beauty
until morning light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:41 PM
This is the closest thing to a painting I've ever read in a poem, Kim. I just kept visualizing your words on canvass, each an every stanza. So nice!! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:51 PM
I appreciate you, my friend!
Legros Kelley Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 1:42 AM
Lovely contrast between the colorful buildings and the snow. Very lovely poem Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 18, 2023 at 6:21 AM
Thank you, BJ!
Baker Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:03 PM
Fascinating Ekphrasis poem, Kim. I especially like your use of colors and lights. It was comforting to read this evening. Have a pleasant weekend, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 9:06 PM
Thank you, Bill! You are the last one I answer tonight! So tired! God bless…have a great night!
Turner Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 4:53 PM
Very colorful and bright, Kim. It is pretty when it snows. A good read! Hoping you are well:)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Thank you, Daniel! I am well and have been kept quite busy lately! God bless you!
Hind Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 3:44 PM
I loved this. I wish it were snowing here, lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2023 at 8:17 PM
Yes, me too! Hugs.
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