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Building Love

takes two to create
built upon two hearts so strong...
castles in the mind
each stone placed with loving care
mason cements strength and trust.

© Harry J Horsman 2013

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Sukmawati Komala

February 18, 2013 at 6:25 PM

Good morning my fav poet,,, just stopping by to enjoy your excellent write...thanks dear Harry for always sharing your great talent <3 <3 <3 Sk

Black Eyed Susan

February 7, 2013 at 7:24 AM

i like that idea - castles in the mind, placed with loving care - good one harry!

Bl Devnath

February 5, 2013 at 10:31 AM

Excellent one enjoyed my friend. It carries a great philosophy of love building in to the hearts of two creating new structures. Thanks for your lovely comment my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Debra Squyres

February 4, 2013 at 11:21 AM

Tanka with an important message...love !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 3, 2013 at 2:38 PM

So true .... a partnership / team work! - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

February 3, 2013 at 1:13 PM

Oh, so good, Harry. I want to add to what Annelise said -and the foundation is God. If He is the midst, you know you got it right. Love ya, Toquyen

Audrey Haick

February 3, 2013 at 10:42 AM

How very true, Harry... love, like any building or structure, is only as strong as its foundation. Well done! Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

February 3, 2013 at 9:02 AM

this is a splendid tanka, Harry, a strong foundation the key!

Donna Jones

February 3, 2013 at 7:20 AM

Hope you are one of the luck ones that find trust like that and give trust like that. Wonderful....

Constance La France

February 3, 2013 at 7:17 AM

Harry, this is truly a beautiful poem, trust is so important in a relationship, without it you have nothing really. Constance

Sara Kendrick

February 3, 2013 at 6:33 AM

Trust which can be destroyed in one wrong event is so much a key to a good relationship..Great work..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by...I hope that your day is good..Sara