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Building Love

takes two to create built upon two hearts so strong... castles in the mind each stone placed with loving care mason cements strength and trust. © Harry J Horsman 2013

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Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/18/2013 6:25:00 PM

Good morning my fav poet,,, just stopping by to enjoy your excellent write...thanks dear Harry for always sharing your great talent <3 <3 <3 Sk

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 2/7/2013 7:24:00 AM

i like that idea - castles in the mind, placed with loving care - good one harry!

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/5/2013 10:31:00 AM

Excellent one enjoyed my friend. It carries a great philosophy of love building in to the hearts of two creating new structures. Thanks for your lovely comment my sweet friend. Loved always, bl

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/4/2013 11:21:00 AM

Tanka with an important message...love !!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2013 2:38:00 PM

So true .... a partnership / team work! - Well written Harry. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 2/3/2013 1:13:00 PM

Oh, so good, Harry. I want to add to what Annelise said -and the foundation is God. If He is the midst, you know you got it right. Love ya, Toquyen

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/3/2013 10:42:00 AM

How very true, Harry... love, like any building or structure, is only as strong as its foundation. Well done! Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2013 9:02:00 AM

this is a splendid tanka, Harry, a strong foundation the key!

Donna Jones

Date: 2/3/2013 7:20:00 AM

Hope you are one of the luck ones that find trust like that and give trust like that. Wonderful....

Constance La France

Date: 2/3/2013 7:17:00 AM

Harry, this is truly a beautiful poem, trust is so important in a relationship, without it you have nothing really. Constance

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2013 6:33:00 AM

Trust which can be destroyed in one wrong event is so much a key to a good relationship..Great work..Enjoyed reading ...Thanks for stopping by...I hope that your day is good..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2013 5:32:00 AM

This is so cleverly done and so true it does take two harry xx