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Building Castles In the Sky

Wanting desiring, Collected hopes Land of impossibilities, Dreams and wishes, Stolen, Trapped forever, Hopes and desires, Held prisoner, Unachievably kidnapped Captured and stored, In the castle in the sky Millions upon millions, Abducted, Taken without permission, Until we can find the key, Opening doorways, To our dreams, In the meantime, Don’t trust that old story, Building castles in the sky, Dreamcatcher Could be flying by. 17/11/2016 For competition sponsor Steven Henderson

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Date: 1/5/2017 1:42:00 AM
Let us find all the keys with the dreamcatcher. Congratulations, Kai
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/5/2017 1:20:00 PM
Thank you Kai xxx
Date: 1/4/2017 6:30:00 PM
I like your take on the theme, Wendy. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/5/2017 1:19:00 PM
Thank you Sandra xxx
Date: 1/4/2017 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations Wendy! Creative you are . :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/4/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Heidi x
Date: 1/4/2017 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your win Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/4/2017 2:37:00 PM
Thank you Joseph xxx
Date: 1/4/2017 8:04:00 AM
Wendy, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/4/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Eve x
Date: 1/3/2017 4:47:00 PM
Interesting twist! Like it! Congrats on your win Wendy! :-)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 1/4/2017 2:38:00 PM
Thank you Mark x
Date: 11/21/2016 8:56:00 PM
Very nicely penned Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/22/2016 6:35:00 AM
Thank you joseph xxx
Date: 11/18/2016 3:17:00 PM
Beautiful, Wendy. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/18/2016 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Elaine xxx
Date: 11/17/2016 7:53:00 AM
Hi Wendy, You penned a well written poem.Can you imagine a life without dreams? I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis xxx
Date: 11/17/2016 4:52:00 AM
- It is important to have dreams, Wendy - A lovely poem - Best wishes and good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Sunshine, yes I live every day with my dreams x lol
Date: 11/17/2016 4:45:00 AM
Those enviable 'Dreams and wishes' ... so beautiful ... and the poem so well written ... very nice ...
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/17/2016 4:49:00 AM
Thank you Probir x

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