Wendy Rycroft Poet Light Verse

Building Castles In the Sky

Wanting desiring,
Collected hopes
Land of impossibilities,
Dreams and wishes,
Stolen,
Trapped forever,
Hopes and desires,	
Held prisoner,
Unachievably kidnapped
Captured and stored,
In the castle in the sky
Millions upon millions,
Abducted,
Taken without permission,
Until we can find the key,
Opening doorways,
To our dreams,
In the meantime,
Don’t trust that old story,
Building castles in the sky,
Dreamcatcher 
Could be flying by.

17/11/2016
For competition sponsor
Steven Henderson

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Kai Michael Neumann January 5, 2017 at 1:42 AM Let us find all the keys with the dreamcatcher. Congratulations, Kai Wendy Rycroft January 5, 2017 at 1:20 PM Thank you Kai xxx

Sandra Haight January 4, 2017 at 6:30 PM I like your take on the theme, Wendy. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Wendy Rycroft January 5, 2017 at 1:19 PM Thank you Sandra xxx

Heidi Sands January 4, 2017 at 2:34 PM Congratulations Wendy! Creative you are . :) Wendy Rycroft January 4, 2017 at 2:37 PM Thank you Heidi x

Joseph May January 4, 2017 at 10:42 AM Congrats on your win Wendy Wendy Rycroft January 4, 2017 at 2:37 PM Thank you Joseph xxx

Eve Roper January 4, 2017 at 8:04 AM Wendy, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve Wendy Rycroft January 4, 2017 at 2:38 PM Thank you Eve x

Mark Martin January 3, 2017 at 4:47 PM Interesting twist! Like it! Congrats on your win Wendy! :-) Wendy Rycroft January 4, 2017 at 2:38 PM Thank you Mark x

Joseph May November 21, 2016 at 8:56 PM Very nicely penned Wendy Wendy Rycroft November 22, 2016 at 6:35 AM Thank you joseph xxx

Elaine George November 18, 2016 at 3:17 PM Beautiful, Wendy. Sure to be on the winners list. Elaine Wendy Rycroft November 18, 2016 at 4:12 PM Thank you, Elaine xxx

Alexis Y. November 17, 2016 at 7:53 AM Hi Wendy, You penned a well written poem.Can you imagine a life without dreams? I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis Wendy Rycroft November 17, 2016 at 1:52 PM Thank you, Alexis xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 17, 2016 at 4:52 AM - It is important to have dreams, Wendy - A lovely poem - Best wishes and good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Wendy Rycroft November 17, 2016 at 5:30 AM Thank you, Sunshine, yes I live every day with my dreams x lol

Probir Gupta November 17, 2016 at 4:45 AM Those enviable 'Dreams and wishes' ... so beautiful ... and the poem so well written ... very nice ... Wendy Rycroft November 17, 2016 at 4:49 AM Thank you Probir x