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Building a Wall

Happy these lonely days myself I peer into my past and touch Feel you with memories vivid Clearly as the sun sets I rise Lift up my eyes hopeful you’ve gone Distance between us now your hate Anger your middle name your sport Playing won some now lost respect Esteem for your facebook on line Tracks a private message to fool Stupid building a wall I’m blind. © Harry J Horsman 2014 A New form i'd like to call link, the last word of the 2/4/2 stanza has to relate in action or meaning to the first word of the next stanza

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/14/2015 5:04:00 PM
Seems like we wrote a poem for a contest something like this..I enjoyed reading your work today..I am glad that I chose it today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/13/2015 9:04:00 AM
The new form "Link" is superb. It's found clearly in 2/4/2. But this poem is a sad poem, i smell here. Connecting the heart feelings with connecting words is done in genius ways. Lovely done, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 1/12/2015 3:26:00 PM
I like this new form of yours. Great write. I especially like the first stanza "being happy while lonely
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Date: 1/12/2015 11:46:00 AM
very creative style and I like the total feel of your work, harry... huggs
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Date: 1/12/2015 6:22:00 AM
Brilliant new form. Together with a great poem, what a winning formula.
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Date: 1/11/2015 7:44:00 PM
I'm with Eileen I enjoy my talks with you! Light & Love
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Date: 1/11/2015 4:19:00 PM
Lovely, Harry. Just don't build any walls that will keep me out! ;) Hugs
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Date: 1/11/2015 1:53:00 PM
Its a similar idea to Richards Mussettle train form - i like it:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/11/2015 2:45:00 PM
Yes Jan it was his poem that inspired me to write this,
Date: 1/11/2015 1:03:00 PM
... always unique !!! - Bravo my friend, Harry ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/11/2015 12:55:00 PM
Great idea, Harry - keeps building. Love, daver
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