budding of spring

March winds are blowing 
remnants of winter away
trees will wear new clothes
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Rodgers Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:06 AM
Dear Lin, I have always loved the haiku form, and yours is one that I also loved the words. Last night we had very strong March winds that lasted into the morning. I could hear it blow all night. Those trees better get dressed quick because it is supposed to get colder next week here in Pennsy! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Lane Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 5:11 AM
You made me shiver thinking about the cold. Last month it snowed here... a phenomenon... Wednesday it was 80, yesterday it dipped into the 30s. Trees have budded and flowers have been blooming. I don't get frigid weather here often, so I'm not sure I could handle it now. I lived in Colorado for 4 years and loved the snow... not so much would I enjoy it so often now. I've rambled. lol Thank you for liking these lines and the weather report, Daniel. ;-)
Jones Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 3:01 AM
Love that last line! A very creative haiku!
Lane Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:54 AM
Morning, Karen and thank you.
Empress Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 1:26 AM
" trees will wear new clothes" that last line dear lin, is so beautiful , i love the way youv written this haiku. So picturesque and flows seamlessly as always. Your words have that aesthetic touch that pleased the soul of the readers. Whether haiku or something long! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always
Lane Avatar
March 21, 2025 at 4:53 AM
I'm glad my words pleased you, Ink. I truly appreciate your words and friendship.
Allison Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 3:29 PM
the trees are starting to dress in emerald green foliage - lovely haiku Lin:-) hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Makes the world more colorful. Thanks, Jan.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 12:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. The trees will be wearing new clothes of pretty green leaves. Can't wait to see them. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 1:27 PM
Thank you, Paula. It's a very windy day... thus this Haiku was born.
Slaughter Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 10:40 AM
I love this, Lin. I wish I could get a new wardrobe each year.
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 10:42 AM
Lol Jim. Climb a tree. Thanks so much for your comments.
Cunningham Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 9:50 AM
Love the image of the trees Lin. Like John we have warm temperatures today ,it’s lovely to see everything coming back to life again. Tom
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 10:42 AM
That’s true, Tom but it sure is windy today.
Read Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 9:31 AM
Hi Lin, the temperature is rising in London, lovely warm day today.
Lane Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 10:41 AM
It’s been fluctuating here. 80 one day 40 the next. Thank you, John.
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