budding of spring

March winds are blowing remnants of winter away trees will wear new clothes

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/21/2025 5:06:00 AM

Dear Lin, I have always loved the haiku form, and yours is one that I also loved the words. Last night we had very strong March winds that lasted into the morning. I could hear it blow all night. Those trees better get dressed quick because it is supposed to get colder next week here in Pennsy! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Lin Lane
Date: 3/21/2025 5:11:00 AM

You made me shiver thinking about the cold. Last month it snowed here... a phenomenon... Wednesday it was 80, yesterday it dipped into the 30s. Trees have budded and flowers have been blooming. I don't get frigid weather here often, so I'm not sure I could handle it now. I lived in Colorado for 4 years and loved the snow... not so much would I enjoy it so often now. I've rambled. lol Thank you for liking these lines and the weather report, Daniel. ;-)

Karen Jones

Date: 3/21/2025 3:01:00 AM

Love that last line! A very creative haiku!

Lin Lane
Date: 3/21/2025 4:54:00 AM

Morning, Karen and thank you.

Ink Empress

Date: 3/21/2025 1:26:00 AM

" trees will wear new clothes" that last line dear lin, is so beautiful , i love the way youv written this haiku. So picturesque and flows seamlessly as always. Your words have that aesthetic touch that pleased the soul of the readers. Whether haiku or something long! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light always

Lin Lane
Date: 3/21/2025 4:53:00 AM

I'm glad my words pleased you, Ink. I truly appreciate your words and friendship.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 3/20/2025 7:15:00 PM

Nice one Lin. Wish those new clothes would get here soon though. I am ready

Lin Lane
Date: 3/20/2025 11:26:00 PM

I’ve been seeing them for days now here. Thanks, Oliver

Jan Allison

Date: 3/20/2025 3:29:00 PM

the trees are starting to dress in emerald green foliage - lovely haiku Lin:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 3/20/2025 4:36:00 PM

Makes the world more colorful. Thanks, Jan.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/20/2025 12:00:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun Haiku write. The trees will be wearing new clothes of pretty green leaves. Can't wait to see them. Have a fun/blessed day as you write away...........

Lin Lane
Date: 3/20/2025 1:27:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. It's a very windy day... thus this Haiku was born.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 3/20/2025 10:40:00 AM

I love this, Lin. I wish I could get a new wardrobe each year.

Lin Lane
Date: 3/20/2025 10:42:00 AM

Lol Jim. Climb a tree. Thanks so much for your comments.