Bucky

Bucky was a gentle soul,
The first horse I ever rode.
A beautiful palomino cross,
Perfect size for a six year old.

He knew I was a novice,
His demeanor was so calm.
No matter what else was going on,
Bucky, you couldn't alarm.

I'd have to climb the nearest fence
Just to reach his stirrup
But once upon his solid back,
Off we'd go , giddy-up.

Round and round the paddock
Bucky and I went,
Learning to ride this gentle soul,
It was time well spent.

One morning as the snowflakes fell
We arrived at the stable to be told
That an offer had been made
And beautiful Bucky had been sold.

The stable had many horses
So there were others I learned to ride
But none were like the first one,
The one for which I cried.

I never learned to ride a bike.
I had no interest, you see.
From the time that I was six years old
There was only one kind of riding for me.



for Constance's Horses or Snowflakes, or Horses and Snowflakes contest:

Bucky, by Francine Roberts 07/10/2010
topic: horses (with a touch of snowflake thrown in)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 9:44 AM
Ahhh, what a touching tale, and I see you threw in some snowflakes. Congratulations on a great win, Francine. LUv, Andrea
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November 2, 2010 at 6:05 AM
Congrats on the win, this is a very pleasing story, enjoyed the read.
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your third place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
Fraser Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:59 AM
It made me smile to see this lovely poem hitting the winners podium Francine. Congratulation's on your win in Constance's contest >> James
Mannan Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:05 PM
A beautiful dedication to Bucky. Many congratulations dear Francine for this win.
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:21 PM
Congrats Francine on your win in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry my friend.. enjoy a top win tonight with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 2:57 PM
Yes, we were both in love with riding horses at an early age, Francine. A great poem about your adventures in learning to ride Bucky! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:53 PM
A heart breaker Francine and lovely. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:34 PM
Such a sweet story this is....and no bike could ever compare to a horse like Bucky! :) Congratulations on your win! ~ Carrie
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:33 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Francine
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations Francine on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
Anderson Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 10:52 PM
Hey Francine, thnx for the comments on my writes. I apprciate them. ...Jimmy
Kendrick Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 3:53 PM
Great write that reads like a winner to me..I bet that was a great animal to have..Good luck...Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 9:08 AM
Children (and adults) become quite attached to animals. I'm sorry you had to find another horse after Bucky was sold, Francine. This is a great entry for Constance's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn
Fraser Avatar
October 9, 2010 at 11:40 AM
Simply beautiful Francine. A lovely glimpse into your life as a young lady >> James :)
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