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maybe see the deepest valley in the ocean or Mars maybe see the Lincoln and Vietnam Memorial or Tibet maybe see the oldest living tree on the planet or the Parthenon maybe see Bethlehem and the Wailing Wall or a volcano maybe see distant relatives I've never known or yesterday... or you again maybe see both of you again, before I die before I die again... 3/18/13 Tim Ryerson Nette Onclaud's 'Wanderlust' contest

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Deborah Burch

Date: 4/5/2013 3:39:00 AM

Travis!! Congratulations on your win. I love reading what you write. Your depth is kindred...like a familiar puzzle Big Hug!! Deb

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/22/2013 4:14:00 PM

TIM, Congratulations in the "Bucket list" contest. always~ Linda

Donna Jones

Date: 3/21/2013 7:40:00 PM

This feels very special Tim....congratulations on your win....blessings to you. Donna

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2013 7:23:00 PM

tim, I sure remember this one especially after the explanation you told me. I'm glad to see it on the list. Congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/19/2013 9:46:00 PM

ha ha, I like the entry Tim, i like the ending line,,, yesterday sounds good to me... i will add the oldest tree on my list one day... and think of you... :-)....pd

Seren Roberts

Date: 3/19/2013 7:16:00 AM

you are in a melancholy mood Tim, you need a hug....HUG Seren

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2013 2:55:00 PM

the many maybe's you wrote makes me think none of them will ever happen. So this seems very sad. I wonder: who are the "two" you refer to in final line!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2013 2:55:00 PM

A good entry to the contest too, Tim.