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Buck

It was a cloudy day in march... The sky was blue, gray, Hot sun outside, within. How statue like he stood, In the early march wind. He stood, he stood, How statue like he stood. Bare naked on the sands, moist tears ducts, sundryed, bound feet. How statue like he stood. A voyage done, rusted anchors weeped, strange faces big guns. How statue like he stood. Fading sounds, mangled, knotted thoughts, screams within. How statue like he stood. Wintered in the moment of the early march wind. He stood, he stood. How statue like he stood. By Jay JOHNSON

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/2/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Jay. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/4/2008 6:21:00 PM
Well done! Can almost be there to see the stillness! Congratulations of well deserved featured poem this week! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/3/2008 8:14:00 AM
Warmest congrats Jay on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/3/2008 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured!
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:17:00 PM
The repetition works well to add strength to your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/2/2008 5:16:00 PM
Great writing Jay, Congratulations on being featured this week. lainie
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Date: 11/2/2008 4:46:00 PM
Congrats Jay, on "Buck" being featured this week. Vince
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