Bubbling Thrill

~this bubbling thrill
makes the night sparkles with love glow
~this bubbling thrill
sailing through hearts with golden feel
Igniting true passion to flow
bad thoughts and emotions make low
~this bubbling thrill~

~this bubbling thrill
glitters like globular structure
~this bubbling thrill
reflecting true traits with a  seal
flowing like cool breeze from seashore
making souls to have smooth nurture
~this bubbling thrill~


Olusegun Arowolo  :   Chosen word:Bubble
COntest:"Alphabets of Rondelet"by Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Merryman Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 5:19 PM
Congrats with your win with this creative write, Olusegun! Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Congrats on this interesting work being in the winners' circle..Sara
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March 7, 2012 at 10:16 AM
ON ANOTHER NOTE... o.a... A VERY LATE .Congratulations ON MY 2ND PLACE CONTEST.. THANK YOU FOR THE SUPPORTING ;-) my contest...much enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 7:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "2nd Place Poems Only" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:49 PM
Though of course this is very good..I want more..the tale ends abruptly please add some more! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Falotico Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Congrats my friend. Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 4:20 PM
congrats Olusegun on a terrific third place win for this outstanding creation of poetic art luv..
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:07 PM
Glad to see this one did so well in the contest. Big congrats for you.
Ronthorpe Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 2:06 PM
Olusegun, This is a very good write. I really enjoyed it. Congrats on making the winners list in Nette's contest...................S.Ronthorpe
Brown Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations on your placement in ~Nette's~ "Alphabets Of Rondelet" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on yur win. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 10:45 AM
Olusegun,Congrats on your win in Nette's contest.Beautiful Rondelet.
Sweetheart Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 9:38 AM
congrats Olusegun on a huge win for this captivating entry luv.. suprb one..
Onclaud Avatar
February 20, 2012 at 4:29 AM
i enjoyed the melodious tone of this rondelet, olu.. best cingrats on your fine placemnet in my contest! :) huggs!
Dietrich Avatar
February 15, 2012 at 3:07 PM
Great title and repeating line, Olusegun. I like the sailing imagery giving it a smooth flow.
Long Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 12:45 PM
Great poem! well-writtren also I enjoyed reading it. Your words were so expressive and emotional in this poem. You did excellent!
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