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Bubbling Spring

When we first met, our love so stark
Would our love sizzle, even spark
Soon a tiny sprinkle implied
Trickling spring bubbled from inside

Beside the lake, when we were young
Our budding love became far-flung
Our love we no longer could hide
Our love's spring bubbled from inside

A young man took a risk in time
Without a reason or a rhyme
The moves you made surely implied
Trickling spring bubbled from inside

Our spring grew into a river
Soon became a child's caregiver
Three children in lifetime we've strive  
Still a spring bubbled from inside

Date Written: September 01 and 02, 2022
Contest: A Kyrielle About Water
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2022

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Jo Hayton Date: 9/14/2022 3:13:00 PM This is beautifully written, love it xxx Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/15/2022 5:23:00 AM Thank you, Jo. Thank you for dropping by and for taking time to comment. Sara

Bill Baker Date: 9/4/2022 4:14:00 PM Bless your bubbling springs from inside both of you, Sara. Lovely, well written Kyrielle for the contest and to celebrate your love. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/5/2022 2:59:00 AM Thank you, Bill. I hope it continues until .......and throughout eternity. We need all the blessings we can get. Sara

Janice Canerdy Date: 9/4/2022 11:56:00 AM Sara, this is such a lovely poem about enduring love and a happy life! Janice Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/4/2022 2:29:00 PM Thank you, Janice. I would not say it all has been a piece of cake, but we stuck together through it all. Sara

Joseph May Date: 9/3/2022 5:47:00 AM Beautiful write Sara, from a trickle to a river of love Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/3/2022 9:44:00 AM Thank you, Joseph. I am delighted that you thought it is beautiful. Your visits to my page inspire me. Sara

Valsa George Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 PM The growth of love into a spring and then into a river is beautifully charted ! It flows, never waning or weakening, but growing stronger ! It is more than mere infatuation. Beautiful poem. All the Best, Sara ! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/3/2022 2:28:00 AM Valsa, love can and does grow within some relationships. Sad it doesn't in all. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Sara

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/2/2022 10:59:00 PM A lively poem much to be admired. Best for a win. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/3/2022 2:25:00 AM Thank you, Victor. The encouragement is awesome. Sara

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/2/2022 11:29:00 AM As lovely as exuberant spring, Sara. Enjoyed the read. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/2/2022 11:44:00 AM Thank you, Vijay. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara

David Kavanagh Date: 9/2/2022 9:47:00 AM A wonderful kyrielle Sara, your bubbling spring has developed into a fountain and flows like a top contender for the contest, cheers David Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 AM I hope it keeps on flowing because we need all the love going that we can get. Sara

Sotto Poet Date: 9/2/2022 9:35:00 AM You did an amazing job writing Kyrielle, Sara. I adored both your insightful views and the amazing metaphors you used. I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm Hugs, Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 AM Why, thank you, Sotto. I need all the luck I can get. Sara