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When we first met, our love so stark Would our love sizzle, even spark Soon a tiny sprinkle implied Trickling spring bubbled from inside Beside the lake, when we were young Our budding love became far-flung Our love we no longer could hide Our love's spring bubbled from inside A young man took a risk in time Without a reason or a rhyme The moves you made surely implied Trickling spring bubbled from inside Our spring grew into a river Soon became a child's caregiver Three children in lifetime we've strive Still a spring bubbled from inside Date Written: September 01 and 02, 2022 Contest: A Kyrielle About Water Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues

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Jo Hayton

Date: 9/14/2022 3:13:00 PM

This is beautifully written, love it xxx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2022 5:23:00 AM

Thank you, Jo. Thank you for dropping by and for taking time to comment. Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 9/4/2022 4:14:00 PM

Bless your bubbling springs from inside both of you, Sara. Lovely, well written Kyrielle for the contest and to celebrate your love. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/5/2022 2:59:00 AM

Thank you, Bill. I hope it continues until .......and throughout eternity. We need all the blessings we can get. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/4/2022 11:56:00 AM

Sara, this is such a lovely poem about enduring love and a happy life! Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/4/2022 2:29:00 PM

Thank you, Janice. I would not say it all has been a piece of cake, but we stuck together through it all. Sara

Joseph May

Date: 9/3/2022 5:47:00 AM

Beautiful write Sara, from a trickle to a river of love

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2022 9:44:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph. I am delighted that you thought it is beautiful. Your visits to my page inspire me. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 PM

The growth of love into a spring and then into a river is beautifully charted ! It flows, never waning or weakening, but growing stronger ! It is more than mere infatuation. Beautiful poem. All the Best, Sara !

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2022 2:28:00 AM

Valsa, love can and does grow within some relationships. Sad it doesn't in all. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/2/2022 10:59:00 PM

A lively poem much to be admired. Best for a win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/3/2022 2:25:00 AM

Thank you, Victor. The encouragement is awesome. Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/2/2022 11:29:00 AM

As lovely as exuberant spring, Sara. Enjoyed the read.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2022 11:44:00 AM

Thank you, Vijay. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sara

David Kavanagh

Date: 9/2/2022 9:47:00 AM

A wonderful kyrielle Sara, your bubbling spring has developed into a fountain and flows like a top contender for the contest, cheers David

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 AM

I hope it keeps on flowing because we need all the love going that we can get. Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/2/2022 9:35:00 AM

You did an amazing job writing Kyrielle, Sara. I adored both your insightful views and the amazing metaphors you used. I want to wish you the best of luck in the contest. Warm Hugs,

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/2/2022 11:41:00 AM

Why, thank you, Sotto. I need all the luck I can get. Sara