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Bubbles Nursery Rhyme

I’m a kid who loves bursting bubbles Because it’s fun to see No one ever got in trouble For bubble busting with me What if we could climb inside And ride within the breeze What does it hurt to try Blow a bubble big enough for me I will lift my arms up high And you do the very same thing We will have a jolly good time Creating a clear bubble dream So far only my arm is wet This bubble must be huge If I am to climb in it And ride it to the moon Oh say can you help create A bubble as big as a car So me and friends can climb in it And ride it to a star

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/1/2024 8:09:00 AM

Karen, your charming, lovely poem captures the carefree times of childhood and makes me SMILE! CONGRATS!! Janice

Karen Jones
Date: 10/1/2024 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Janice!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/30/2024 2:02:00 PM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Bubbles Nursery Rhyme" write again... Have a great day with your win..................

Karen Jones
Date: 9/30/2024 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Paula!

Jim Healey

Date: 9/29/2024 3:13:00 AM

Nicely done, Karen. Congrats on the win.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/29/2024 6:14:00 AM

Wow I was unaware! Thanks Jim!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/11/2024 9:24:00 PM

'Bubble bursting! LMAO! Forgot all about that 'sport!' Gobs of fun, I always thought -- til I lost my first contest. ~ Gooey All Over

Karen Jones
Date: 9/12/2024 12:58:00 AM

lol. So funny how we loved simple things so long ago! Hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2024 2:39:00 AM

The old Man on the moon is surprised. Another human to disturb his peace. So you go to Venus, with all my love :) Blessings.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/11/2024 6:08:00 AM

lol hugs Victor

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/10/2024 4:14:00 AM

'Little Mary' poet, you excel in rhymes, and your nursery rhymes reflects your caring loving thoughts. sweet writing. Cheers.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/10/2024 5:04:00 AM

You are kind and generous thanks!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/9/2024 10:16:00 PM

Wow this is beautiful! And this line stood out for me! Very imaginative and clever “If I am to climb in it And ride it to the moon” made me see through your words such wishful thinking! Reminds me of son when he was little he used to love bubbles, and he used to make them, you know those toys! Ah how time flies and how i miss that! Beautiful and uplifting poem this is! Best wishes. Sending you light always dear talented soul! Keep writing and sharing!

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 11:56:00 PM

Thanks Inky! This is for contest and the photo has huge bubbles inspiring.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/9/2024 5:15:00 PM

Your poem pops with imagination. I love the images.

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 5:20:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed it and thanks Hilda!

Joseph May

Date: 9/9/2024 4:51:00 PM

Lovely nursery rhyme Karen, best wishes

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 5:19:00 PM

Thanks Joseph!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/9/2024 2:03:00 PM

What a fun "Bubbles Nursery Rhyme" write you have here. Kids of all ages love bursting bubbles. "Good Luck" I did a different one. Have a blessed day writing away..............

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 2:22:00 PM

Headed to your page now! Have a blessed day!

David Crandall

Date: 9/9/2024 12:43:00 PM

Karen, this is a fun poem! I like the idea of travelling by bubble. You'd have a 360-degree view! I guess you'd go where the wind takes you. When my son was a kid, we went to a birthday party, where someone hired a bubble-making guy for entertainment. This guy actually made bubble that completely surrounded kids!

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 12:46:00 PM

WOW that sounds like a fun party! I bet the kids had a blast! Thanks for validation and for NOT bursting my travel bubble idea! Haha joke

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2024 8:22:00 AM

This is very clever. I think it could be a chart topper

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 11:17:00 AM

Really? Wow I don’t know but the photos were of the cutest little kids! I’m sure it will be a fun challenge! Thanks Andrea!

Terry Flood

Date: 9/9/2024 8:16:00 AM

Out of this world, Karen. I’ll watch the moon this evening and imagine I see a glassy globe with a nice old Chevvy bouncing around inside it. If I do… I’ll give you a wave ;-) Terry

Karen Jones
Date: 9/9/2024 11:16:00 AM

Hahahaha Terry please do! Thanks for the laugh!