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Bubbles

bubbles remind me of deep water an ocean of midnight stealing my breath it's slow motion cold constricting my lungs sending circles of my life to the surface to pop bubbles remind me of fourth grade summers and the dish soap smell of the bubbles we blew through a plastic stick with a circle on the end watching them rise in the air until they popped and splattered our still innocent faces

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/20/2009 8:36:00 PM
Very cute, such simple things in life that can mean so much and bring on pleasures.
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Date: 4/18/2009 7:04:00 PM
ahh.. the good and bad of bubbles.. Nice picture of past and present,,,\ Hudgs, Robin
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:02:00 PM
Better dayz, better dayz....Hey... got me thinkin bout better dayz. Good one Bro.
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Date: 4/17/2009 10:49:00 AM
Indeed, bubbles do seem like "circles of life" that are sent to the surface of "deep water." That's a great observation! The second verse brought back fun memories from childhood. (My favorite toy was a "bubble gun." It spewed dozens of bubbles at one time.) Very nice, Brian! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2009 10:28:00 AM
i love this one,i still do it sometimes,bubbles with liquid soap-sshhhh ;-)charma
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Date: 4/17/2009 9:23:00 AM
This is cute, brought back a few memorys!:)
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