Bubble of Influence

was god chewing gum mulling over creation big bang ~ that could work By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/25/2021 6:03:00 AM

Hilarious you thought of this! Great imagination!

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/25/2021 6:37:00 AM

As you may well have suspected Caren, I was chewing gum writing a different poem, when the thought entered my mind, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/17/2020 5:16:00 PM

Like it David While chewing over it Here's 1 for you What about Pop Rock's Or A Sherbet Dib Dab perhaps.

David Kavanagh
Date: 8/17/2020 7:29:00 PM

Although very fizzy I’m not sure if they would make a bubble Christopher my point was when chewing gum he blew a huge bubble that burst giving god the idea of the Big Bang and cosmic inflation to start creation cheers David