Bubble Dreams 2

I climbed a moonlit bubble to touch the midnight sky
slipped into tie dyed memories of carefree days gone by. 










3/5/2017
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Baker Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 11:40 PM
A poem that touched my creative mind and pushed the button to pleasant memories in my past. Thank you, Laura. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Leiser Avatar
March 3, 2022 at 3:42 PM
Thanks so much, Bill! One of my few whimsical poems that I’ve penned from the past. I want to write more this way!
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February 28, 2022 at 10:29 AM
Oh Laura, this is so utterly charming and filled with creativity - love the imagery. Congratulations on your win!
Leiser Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 8:57 PM
Thank you, Sam! So happy you liked this one! :)
Lawrence Avatar
February 26, 2022 at 2:29 PM
I love this Laura :) I want to climb the moonlit bubble ! Blessings,Susan
Leiser Avatar
February 27, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Thank you, Susan! So happy you liked this! :)
Rose  Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 8:40 AM
such creative words, only come from within, the moon is smiling. :)
Leiser Avatar
February 25, 2022 at 3:41 PM
Thanks so much, Vie! :)
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February 23, 2022 at 9:08 AM
So delicate and delightful! Congratulations on your win in the contest! :)Paulette
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thank you, Paulette! :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 8:17 PM
Very impressive Laura. Congratulations on your 4th place win! Wonderful imagery! Blessings xxoo
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thank you, Connie! :)
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February 22, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Hi Laura, I’m just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a good evening-Alexis
Leiser Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:22 PM
Thanks, Alexis! :)
Canerdy Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:52 PM
Laura, this is a lovely couplet. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:54 PM
Thank you, Janice! :)
Hankins Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 6:11 PM
Laura, I liked your couplet a lot. Thanks for entering my contest, and congratulations on your placement in the top ten out of 50 entries!
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 7:53 PM
Thank you so very much for my placement in your couplet contest, Milton! I’m very honored that you liked it! :)
Y. Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 9:47 AM
WoW! Laura, I'm so happy you reposed this gem. I found it to be deep and thought-provoking. I won't be able to look at a moonlit sky the same way. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis
Leiser Avatar
February 22, 2022 at 3:04 PM
Thank you, Alexis. So happy you liked this! :)
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February 9, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Yes, gazing at the moonlit sky, wrapped in memories, so tranquil and reflective, so heartfelt~
Leiser Avatar
February 11, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Thank you, Michelle. Happy you liked this! :)
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