Milton Toran Poet Rhyme

Bubble Bath

Sittin' in the bath tub,
it's just me and you;
Talkin' about the day we had,
that's what we like to do

"BLOOP! BLOOP! BLOOP!"
bubbles ripple through the air;
"Sorry honey, I cut the cheese!"
"Come back, let's be fair!"

Sittin' in the bath tub,
my spirit's lost its tone;
Guess I'll read the paper,
looks like I'm all alone!

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Dillon Lewis January 27, 2012 at 8:16 PM that was nice

Twanna Irisha January 27, 2012 at 7:47 PM lol..2 cute :)

Robert Pettit January 26, 2012 at 12:10 AM Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I don't blame her for not getting back into the tub with you.

Carol Sunshine Brown January 24, 2012 at 11:43 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week Milton. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr. January 23, 2012 at 7:22 PM I can't believe it took over 3 years for this to be featured. Congrats Milton. Like Redd Foxx said, the reason it has an odor is so the deaf can enjoy it. Gotta love it. Vince

Doris Culverhouse September 13, 2009 at 6:26 PM you blew her away!! she's not in Kansas any more.

John Heck January 26, 2009 at 11:34 AM Another poem that had me grinning from ear to ear. Hope all is well with you and I wish you and your loved one's a Happy 2009! Peace always, John

Vince Suzadail Jr. December 4, 2008 at 5:35 PM This was hillarious. Vince

Christopher Higgins November 29, 2008 at 2:00 PM You are a good. Simply awesome!

Sharon Winter November 4, 2008 at 5:52 AM Oh good grief! Your wife must be in hysterics on a daily basis! You are certainly on a roll Milt. Hope you keep em coming! Love, Shar

Sean Kelly November 4, 2008 at 1:25 AM Air, air , Milton .... Clever piece ... reminds me of the original author of " Bubbles In The Bath "" ... Mr.Wynn D Bottom .....