Bubble

Drifting in my own sweet 
bubble all these years, thinking 
everything is crystal clear, as 
clear as the view from within.. 
all of a sudden, it seemed 
pellucid, tried figuring out what 
was going wrong.. gave every 
detail a lot of thought, but I 
was inordinately disappointed.. 
Tried letting go, tired not 
thinking too hard.. One 
morning, startled, I find my 
feet sensing the rugged earth.. 
woke up into an entirely 
unfamiliar phase, one filled 
with bitterness and negativity, 
seemed like a whole new 
puzzle to me.. What I feel right 
now is a mélange of emotions - 
mystified, taken aback, 
strange, claustrophobic, 
vulnerable, chilled to the bone.. 
Reality finally dawned upon 
me, realised that the pellucid 
bubble was a sign, a warning.. 
My sweet bubble had 
disappeared, again signalling 
me to go ahead, whispering to 
me that it has made me strong, 
pushing me to face the reality 
as time has come for me to put 
together the zillion lessons and 
fly high on my own... I know its 
going to be tough, but I know 
I'll shine.. Thank you Bubble..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/27/2013 10:28:00 AM
Sandhya, ... Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. It was nice seeing it on the Poetry Soup-- HOME PAGE. Always a poetry soup friend <3 = LINDA
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Date: 10/27/2013 1:23:00 AM
Sandhya, CONGRATULATIONS ;) on having your poem featured................... LOVE SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2013 6:51:00 PM
Sandhya, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2013 2:27:00 PM
Sandhya,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2013 1:18:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup, Sandhya ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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