Brushing Your Sweet Lips

Brushing your sweet lips I shift my placement to you Kissing your soft cheek Russell Sivey

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/24/2012 1:58:00 PM

this is endearing, russell... always a good sense of poetic thought; shifting lips to kiss.... i see here a great craftsman putting words together in a very pleasing way.. greatt senryu..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/24/2012 9:48:00 AM

thank you for the nice words on my wife's poem .she is able to read with me tonite and has enjoyed your words of tender romance. Ron.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/24/2012 8:15:00 AM

lovely write, Russell

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/24/2012 7:11:00 AM

Good morning, Russell very sweet...a very precious. And gentle image... like a Precious Moment ..collection ..enjoyed ..pd