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Brunch

in
between
hot rising
pezones
and
pickled
feet

i
slowly
un
do
her
belly
button

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Date: 12/31/2020 1:06:00 PM
I'm assuming you are commencing to make love here. I assume the focus is her navel. But, I'm still trying to figure out how one would "un do her belly button." Metaphor for having brunch?
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 12/31/2020 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for your comment. If I may: "pezones" are Spanish for "nipples"; so in between her feet and nipples is the bellybutton. So such as the word implies it is a "button"; so I'm hopefully trying to undo her pants. Just some, hopefully, word foreplay. Thanks

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