Bruises and Lace

She walks to school
draped in bruises and lace,
Hiding her secret pain.

Crying out in every way
slipping grades, fights every day,
Hoping her cries would be seen.

They all wonder but never ask,
guessing at what she's holding back
choosing to looking the other way.

Till one day,
she doesn't come back
too broken to move.

Late at night she cries out
split lip; her eyes swollen shut
a few bruised broken ribs.

When help finally comes,
it's already too late
she had slipped away.

A fragile soul caught
up in a torrent
drugs, hate and rage.

Now they all mourn
wondering what more
could have been done.

Years pass by
memories fade
now nothing remains
of an angels broken fate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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May 10, 2014 at 8:42 AM
I really like this, excellent job
Palmer Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 1:07 PM
touching write Amanda,,,felt the pain in your words,,this is deep,,,
Sirak Avatar
April 23, 2014 at 6:17 AM
"Bruises and Lace", wow, what a powerful image you produced. Brilliantly written poem. Congrats on your win.
Roberts Avatar
April 21, 2014 at 10:39 PM
So well written congrats ....Seren
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April 21, 2014 at 6:39 PM
Amanda, , Loved how you extracted this one away. Congratulations, this is a great win, for such a painful and realistic theme, when writing about this topic, In which phantom's around Abused Women. Have a nice day:) ~LINDA
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April 21, 2014 at 4:39 PM
Thank you for entering the contest, Amanda and congratulations on your placement. I love the way you show that this girl was "Crying out in every way" but no one wished to hear her; and, then, they wonder "what more could have been done". In a very real way, our response to the abused (or non-response) simply enables the abuser. Your last verse, sadly sums it up - "memories fade", "nothing remains" - all of which allows it to happen again to the next angel. Sad. Joe
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March 22, 2014 at 10:09 AM
Some stories someone has to tell even poeticly.
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