CayCay Godwin Poet Triolet

Bruised Thru Eternity

My sad life story lacks glory.
Fathomless singed pain bears my name
as echoed in gray rhapsody.
My sad life story lacks glory 
and will bruise thru eternity
for no quietus seeks its aim.
My sad life story lacks glory.
Fathomless singed pain bears my name.

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Gayle Rodd April 30, 2018 at 7:18 PM There's a sad beauty in this poem..."echoed in gray rhapsody"- beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner April 13, 2018 at 9:11 AM I relate to the sadness in this, it is so stirring-

Line Gauthier April 10, 2018 at 10:18 PM Congrats on your win, CayCay, with this lovely write.

Constance La France April 3, 2018 at 3:16 PM CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Triolet, I loved it !

Robert Lindley April 1, 2018 at 1:51 PM Truly exceptional creation my friend. Triolets for me are very hard to compose but you made this look easy while giving a clear and important message. A fav..

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 31, 2018 at 2:41 PM This poem is like a lovely flower blossoming, CayCay. Graceful poetic elegance. Very fine Easter offering. Love and hugs.

FJ Thomas March 30, 2018 at 6:24 PM So sadly beautiful CayCay.

Paul Callus March 28, 2018 at 4:49 PM Well done, CayCay!! Using a Triolet to capably and meaningfully incorporate all five prompts is awesome. I would not wish for anyone to live in sadness all their lives! ~ Warm regards // paul CayCay Godwin March 28, 2018 at 5:40 PM I agree, Paul. Sadness is such a heavy and dark emotion, one that I, too, dread any person having to feel. I know it has its season in all our lives, that is tough enough! Thank you for commenting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2018 at 3:07 PM Wonderful, Caycay!!! Great minds.... you know the rest. But hey, you took yours in a completely different direction! soupmail.

Heidi Sands March 28, 2018 at 1:30 PM Oh so sad, and yet great for the contest with the use of the words. Well done CayCay :) CayCay Godwin March 28, 2018 at 5:38 PM Thank you, Heidi - so glad 'sad' is not my emotion, but I've been there and well know its feel. Hope it isn't your emotion either! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Silent One March 27, 2018 at 8:50 AM This is so sad, I know it is fictional, but you wrote a poem of lonesome heartache.. CayCay Godwin March 27, 2018 at 9:07 AM I can thank you with joy because, yes, it is fiction. I am glad to have your feedback, I always am. Poetry hugs ... CayCay