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Bruised Thru Eternity

My sad life story lacks glory. Fathomless singed pain bears my name as echoed in gray rhapsody. My sad life story lacks glory and will bruise thru eternity for no quietus seeks its aim. My sad life story lacks glory. Fathomless singed pain bears my name. ... CayCay Jennings March 27, 2018

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Gayle Rodd

Date: 4/30/2018 7:18:00 PM

There's a sad beauty in this poem..."echoed in gray rhapsody"- beautiful!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/13/2018 9:11:00 AM

I relate to the sadness in this, it is so stirring-

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 10:18:00 PM

Congrats on your win, CayCay, with this lovely write.

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2018 3:16:00 PM

CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Triolet, I loved it !

Robert Lindley

Date: 4/1/2018 1:51:00 PM

Truly exceptional creation my friend. Triolets for me are very hard to compose but you made this look easy while giving a clear and important message. A fav..

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 3/31/2018 2:41:00 PM

This poem is like a lovely flower blossoming, CayCay. Graceful poetic elegance. Very fine Easter offering. Love and hugs.

Fj Thomas

Date: 3/30/2018 6:24:00 PM

So sadly beautiful CayCay.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/28/2018 4:49:00 PM

Well done, CayCay!! Using a Triolet to capably and meaningfully incorporate all five prompts is awesome. I would not wish for anyone to live in sadness all their lives! ~ Warm regards // paul

Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/28/2018 5:40:00 PM

I agree, Paul. Sadness is such a heavy and dark emotion, one that I, too, dread any person having to feel. I know it has its season in all our lives, that is tough enough! Thank you for commenting. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2018 3:07:00 PM

Wonderful, Caycay!!! Great minds.... you know the rest. But hey, you took yours in a completely different direction! soupmail.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/28/2018 1:30:00 PM

Oh so sad, and yet great for the contest with the use of the words. Well done CayCay :)

Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/28/2018 5:38:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi - so glad 'sad' is not my emotion, but I've been there and well know its feel. Hope it isn't your emotion either! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Silent One

Date: 3/27/2018 8:50:00 AM

This is so sad, I know it is fictional, but you wrote a poem of lonesome heartache..

Caycay Jennings
Date: 3/27/2018 9:07:00 AM

I can thank you with joy because, yes, it is fiction. I am glad to have your feedback, I always am. Poetry hugs ... CayCay