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BRUISED IMPRESSION

Bare hands stirring over my body Little resistance, pushed against wall Echoing of my scream shivered down Strong figure felt like a known to me The stare sensed me of my own blood Little did I know, Dad about you..

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Ink Empress

Date: 3/8/2024 11:26:00 PM

Poignant powerful write that makes me sad and feel for whoever that has been through similar things, and your words, although not long, truly is soul hitting and i had to literally find my breath as i read that ending, heart wrenching… i especially loved the line “ The stare sensed me of my own blood“ what a moving write this is. Youve expressed very well. Congratulations on your win

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/9/2024 6:04:00 AM

Feels so grateful that you understood the depth of the poem. Thank you for the comment. Wish you luck for upcoming contests:)

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/7/2024 7:56:00 PM

Dear Radhika, your poetic voice is deeply moving within the imagery of your poignant potent poem. Shine the light, dear poet. Congratulations for your win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/8/2024 12:52:00 AM

Thanks Susan read your poem too it was truly mesmerizing congratulations for winning the contest too:)

Aly Bahr

Date: 3/3/2024 11:24:00 PM

I feel you. Thank you.

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/4/2024 3:50:00 AM

More power to you:)

Abhishek Chaudhary

Date: 3/3/2024 11:19:00 AM

We need poet's like you More power to you ma'am

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/3/2024 10:21:00 PM

Thanks means a lot :)

Karen Jones

Date: 3/3/2024 11:00:00 AM

Powerful! Very courageous raw write. See my poem Bipolar Blackberry or listen to my song SONG REPOST BECAUSE YOU DRINK & DRIVE if you like! They are both raw. Welcome to soup!

RADHIKA AGARWAL
Date: 3/3/2024 10:20:00 PM

THANKS KAREN.. WILL GIVE IT A READ FOR SURE:)

RADHIKA AGARWAL

Date: 3/3/2024 8:49:00 AM

Women are the strongest one on this planet