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BRUISED IMPRESSION

Bare hands stirring over my body
Little resistance, pushed against wall
Echoing of my scream shivered down
Strong figure felt like a known to me
The stare sensed me of my own blood
Little did I know, Dad about you..

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Ink Empress

March 8, 2024 at 11:26 PM

Poignant powerful write that makes me sad and feel for whoever that has been through similar things, and your words, although not long, truly is soul hitting and i had to literally find my breath as i read that ending, heart wrenching… i especially loved the line “ The stare sensed me of my own blood“ what a moving write this is. Youve expressed very well. Congratulations on your win

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 9, 2024 at 6:04 AM

Feels so grateful that you understood the depth of the poem. Thank you for the comment. Wish you luck for upcoming contests:)

Susan Ashley

March 7, 2024 at 7:56 PM

Dear Radhika, your poetic voice is deeply moving within the imagery of your poignant potent poem. Shine the light, dear poet. Congratulations for your win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 8, 2024 at 12:52 AM

Thanks Susan read your poem too it was truly mesmerizing congratulations for winning the contest too:)

Aly Bahr

March 3, 2024 at 11:24 PM

I feel you. Thank you.

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 4, 2024 at 3:50 AM

More power to you:)

Abhishek Chaudhary

March 3, 2024 at 11:19 AM

We need poet's like you More power to you ma'am

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 3, 2024 at 10:21 PM

Thanks means a lot :)

Karen Jones

March 3, 2024 at 11:00 AM

Powerful! Very courageous raw write. See my poem Bipolar Blackberry or listen to my song SONG REPOST BECAUSE YOU DRINK & DRIVE if you like! They are both raw. Welcome to soup!

RADHIKA AGARWAL

March 3, 2024 at 10:20 PM

THANKS KAREN.. WILL GIVE IT A READ FOR SURE:)