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Bruised

do not leave me for I wear your absence-- sadly, unwillingly; like pebbles, pulled from the strength-- of mountains. like summer heat, trapped within the cooling winds of fall-- left shivering; and each hour is filled-- with emptiness; while every moment-- presses painfully against the darkened bruise-- of your abandonment...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/23/2009 3:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Bernadette and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 12/20/2009 1:30:00 PM
Many congrats on having three poems make it through to round two! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2009 10:57:00 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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Date: 6/15/2009 2:46:00 PM
i will find it difficult to leave ur penmanship.....hereafter.
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Date: 6/4/2009 11:59:00 AM
beautiful write
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Date: 6/3/2009 5:26:00 PM
Beautifully done ... love the image of the pebble pulled from the mountain ... special write here, Bernadette and well done !!
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Date: 6/1/2009 12:37:00 AM
Beautiful poem...Please read "Falling" by Glasskey
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