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Brrrrr Cold Cobalt Blue Waters flow....adverse elements Downhill all the way

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/19/2010 3:25:00 AM

I'm shivering and smiling on this one, Sara. Very nice.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/25/2010 10:07:00 PM

If this is the one for the picture contest, you have aptly described that picture. I could not even write about it. Too COLD for me. haha. LUv, Andrea. and good luck in the contest, dear!!

Lynette Chachere

Date: 2/25/2010 3:58:00 PM

sounds cold. a cold waterfall when you say -downhill all the way- i don't understand how people aren't even a bit afraid when jumping into one. but with the sight of it in your poem it's soothing with the sounds of falling water. -Always&Forever Lynette

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/25/2010 7:53:00 AM

A new favorite.... Awesome haiku my friend....:JP]

Skat A

Date: 2/25/2010 7:37:00 AM

THIS IS COLD !!! VERY BEAUTIFUL IN DEED. A GREAT HAIKU TO START SUCH A BRRRRRR MORNING...THANK UUU 4 THE A++ ON MY FIRST LIMERICK EVER....IRMA

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/25/2010 7:11:00 AM

Chilling, yet refreshing to us Southerners. Very nice haiku, Sara. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/25/2010 5:18:00 AM

Another beautiful description .. that title is sooooo cool.... thankxxx for your inspiring comments of encouragement on my poetry today.. so very welcome and appreciated.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/25/2010 5:07:00 AM

gives me an idea for another version of that picture. enjoyed reading. do you think you could pick up Caleb tomorrow at school?