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Brownish Flowers

Once knew a chappie named Antonio From his bum, brownish flowers did grow A delightful appearance Sold them for a pittance Saved some to set his love's heart aglow © Jack Ellison 2015

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Michael Tor

Date: 10/2/2015 2:08:00 PM

Jack your follower's are contributing just fine. Tim and Carol are kicking a__! The more the merry!!!!!! Your posse are here my friend accept for John John.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/3/2015 6:52:00 AM

Everybody's doin' it!!!!!!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/2/2015 1:14:00 PM

Young Tony turned over and lifted his skirt...where falling down were piles of dirt....tiny flowers did grow...with little sunshine to show...when he picked them it sure did hurt

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/2/2015 1:19:00 PM

LOL You are starting to make me look like a rank amateur, Mr. Tim!!!

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/2/2015 12:14:00 PM

Jack once sat in a Lilly pond... Making brown bubbles with his magical beyond... He thought this so cute as he yawned... Later Lady Cathy had to post bond... Oh well! Was all he'd respond... Bad Boy... Bad Boy! LOL... But then everyone knew you had it in you to spawn... LOL... Sorry... I couldn't stop myself...

Carol Eastman
Date: 10/2/2015 6:17:00 PM

Naw... Dragon would be too upset if we left him behind... LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/2/2015 1:13:00 PM

You are REALLY getting into it!!! LOL Soon, only limericks will be allowed on P-Soup!!! xxx