Brownies

BROWNIES i’m baking brownies have scraped the mixing bowl clean sniff the aroma now the kid-in-me comes out how I stole a piece stole out

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Sundari Kannan

Date: 1/16/2011 10:08:00 PM

MY DOTTY MAKES CLASSIC BROWNIES SO I KNOW WHEN THE AROMA YOU SNIFF AND HOW HEAVENLY IT IS..SUNKAN

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/3/2010 10:09:00 PM

Giggling...always tempting are brownies, especially chuck full of walnuts...I can smell the aroma.. Enjoyed. Thanks for the visit, Dave! Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2010 9:28:00 PM

AHA, you little culprit. Come back here so I can beat you with the spatula. hahaha. Dang, you arleady licked it clean!!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/22/2010 7:48:00 PM

now I am craving for some brownies-- the chewy ooey gooey kind! mmm with lots of walnuts too-- gosh-- I think I better bake something-- enjoyed this one Daver :) yummmmm--- nikko :)

James Peranteau

Date: 10/22/2010 6:07:00 AM

I swear I'm smelling brownies right now ! Great Tanka Dear poet. We got that snatching thingy from Adam and Eve Daver...sending you soup mail in a min. james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2010 3:52:00 PM

Great idea to steal a brownie about now..Enjoyed your tasty work..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/21/2010 2:56:00 PM

yummy Daver ... brownies are comfort food and your Tanka is comfort Tanka..luv.. enjoyed the visual and aromatic piece from your creative pen luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/21/2010 2:09:00 PM

LOL I think the batter tastes better than the brownies, so I'd have trouble baking them at all. That's why I don't bake anymore, Daver, too much temptation. Love, Carolyn

Tobey Hill

Date: 10/21/2010 2:07:00 PM

there's always a little film left in the mixing bowls that only licking will take care of :)) This gave me a smile, well done..TAH