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Brown Thrasher

fall morn Brown Thrasher visits empty bird feeder... under millet grows

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/11/2012 10:14:00 AM
Hey good Haiku Sara.." thanks for that comment on spectacles; nice try..You were off track though.) take care Joe..)
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Date: 11/10/2012 11:02:00 PM
LOVELY LINES SARA AS OUR TWO BIRD FEEDERS WERE SWEPT AWAY BY HURRICANE .. SPRING STARTS ANEW LUV.. U SHOULD HAVE A HAIKU CONTEST TO CHALLENGE OUR IMAGERY AS U R SO PROFICIENT AT THIS FORM ..
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Date: 11/10/2012 4:34:00 PM
that' a very nice expressed Haiku, Thanks for sharing it.God bless you.Hugs!Erich
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Date: 11/10/2012 3:18:00 PM
yes, I can see why your haiku is getting praised, my friend - lovely write
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Date: 11/10/2012 2:54:00 PM
not silly them birds, like this, again a wonderful picture you paint in such a small poem...
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Date: 11/10/2012 9:33:00 AM
I am not sure about the last line, maybe "millet grows under". I love these birds, but have not seen any where I now live.
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Date: 11/10/2012 9:33:00 AM
Is a Brown Thrasher a bird Sara? I'm not familiar with this animal, nevertheless this write is phenomenal as it is! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and pleasant poem this morning! What a delightful piece, Great Work!
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Date: 11/10/2012 8:27:00 AM
Good morning Sara..aweee... is thst a bird... if so I will look it up on my computer when I'm home... nice haiku... always..pd
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