Brown Shoes

When things you do you always lose
You consequently have the blues
        How you will feel
        You can’t conceal
The world’s a Tuxedo and you are brown shoes!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bono Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 12:55 PM
Thank you for your comment but it is time for me to go.
Murphy Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 8:30 AM
VERY NICE I RELLY ENJOY YOUR LIMERICKS KEEP IT UP LOVED IT FALESHIA
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