Brown Paper Packages

Desultory winds chimera in throes of doubt effusive, disconsolate -clanging in hills stout- Ductile mind bends sound. virtuoso of the void— sweet, zoetic, browned
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Hind Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 5:59 PM
An interesting write on this concept- :) really gripping imagery
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 4:51 PM
I was holding my breath as I read your poem wondering what the connection was to brown paper bags...then that last line! Brilliant. sending you Texas hugs, Sara
Anaya Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 2:54 PM
Chilling exasperation, we are of this package. Excellent use of distracting words, Sotto Poet! __August blessings
Alhemaidy Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 1:14 PM
cute sotto!
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