Brown Eyes

Reminiscent of a doe
with a hue as rich as earth,
your gaze takes me home
to a cedar-filled hearth.

Welcoming like hot chocolate
and as vibrant as autumn's leaves,
your stare carries the life
that Mother Nature herself weaves.

Neutral, yet expressive—
as versatile as leather, but still so alive—
your eyes are the gemstones
favored by the sun and I alike.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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August 3, 2025 at 4:16 PM
Hello Vaviana Young :-) Romantic lovely poem! Brown eyes pure summer natural honey eyes, color! Have a nice day ~ AA
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