Brown Bag Lunch

A patient came out of the patient's room
Into the doctor's office lobby zoom
A brown paper bag
Held in his hand sag
Declared, "I'll share my lunch" with loud boom  

My husband with humorous thought said
They go good with salad and no bread
The patient then spoke
Croutons atop bloke
Laughter and  twinkle between unsaid 

At least he had a sense of humor..
When they weighted me I came
back out and told my husband
I just found out that I am way too
short..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Horne Avatar
December 22, 2013 at 4:53 PM
LOL - good one - and, LOL, love your height/weight comment too : )
Hamilton Avatar
December 21, 2013 at 3:22 PM
so funny Sara good pen Shadow x smile hug
Undertaker Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 7:53 AM
Sara, i read the previous two writes too.I hope you are well.My prayers are there for your good health.Take care.(: ) Jenish.
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:46 PM
That last line put such a big smile on my face. Thanks for sharing. I once put my BMI into a calculator and found that I was the wrong ethnicity, go figure???
Mehta Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 9:01 AM
The humor will make you recover fast, Really you a remarkable lady, sara
Sivey Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 8:14 AM
Ha ha, this is a humorous write my friend, I especially liked you comment at the end..."I just found out that I am way too short.." LOL! I know what you mean wit that one Sara, I think I'm too short too...Maybe if I was 6 foot 6 inches tall I'd weigh the right amount! So I can relate! Thi sis a stupendous poem, such a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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