Brown Bag Flu

I made myself sick with the brown bag flu,

     From drinking too much of that “Mountain Dew”;

          So here’s what I say,

          NO drinking today;

                I pray this never happens to you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 6, 2012 at 3:47 AM
Very nice Limerick.Enjoyed.
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December 30, 2011 at 11:50 AM
Ohh dear...no drinking for me !!! Nice limerick !!!! Enjoyed !!!
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December 30, 2011 at 11:44 AM
Thank you......no drinking today. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TIRZAH. oxox hugs from Anne-Lise
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