Brothers In Arms

(On the Opposite Sides)

When you cry i'll come running/
down where the lilies bloom/
beneath the willow tree,/
a farmer's field/ of war and peace/
echoing vacant sound,/ pain, pain go away./
Big brother/ you are in my blood/
the flower of the nations youth,/
when the Bugles called/
opposites join the opposites/
family torn apart,/
the fusillading of a freedom fighter/
stepping through time/
under bridges and out of mind./
Another soldier died today/
unanswered questions/
the battle between body and spirit,/
war will get it's due./

 © Harry J Horsman 2019

no filler words used.
entered into 20 Titles from 20 Friends Sponsor Richard Lamoureux
28 july 2019

1st place.

titles used

When you cry i'll come running/Eve Roper
Down where the lilies bloom/Sara Kendrick
Beneath the willow tree/Victor Buhagiar
A Farmer's field/Darlene De Beaulieu
Of war and peace/Andrea Dietrich
Echoing vacant sound/Vijay Pandit
Pain pain go away/Panagiota Romios
Big brother/Tom Cunningham
You are in my blood/Richard Lamoureux
The flower of the nations youth/Linda Williams
When the Bugle's called/Seren Roberts
Opposites join the opposites/Alkas Poetry
Family torn apart/Caren Krutsinger
The Fusillading of a freedom fighter/Susan Ashley
Stepping through time/Carolyn Devonshire
Under bridges and out of mind/Craig Cornish
Another soldier died today/Robert L Hinshaw
Unanswered questions/Maureen McGreavy
The battle between body and spirit/John Hamilton
War will get it's due/M L Kiser
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Sands Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Congratulations for this great poem and win Harry :)
Hannah Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 6:13 PM
Wow
Lamoureux Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 9:51 AM
Back to read people’s comments. I’m pleased that others are also enjoying this Excellent piece. Blessings Richard.
Shields Avatar
August 18, 2019 at 1:51 PM
Just come across this, I think it's wonderful. Very well done. x
Godwin Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 6:44 PM
You did a great job putting together such a poignant poem, Harry - really you did. I just looked down to see if you won because I believe this write should have placed - I'm happy to see that indeed it did. All the best ... CayCay
Scars Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 3:07 PM
wow amazing poem! congrats! :)-luloo
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:49 AM
And back with congrats for climbing the best poem chart at #15.
Milgate Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Strong poem gives a sense you have been there.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 4, 2019 at 3:59 AM
Brilliant there could never be a doubt on the winner here and all with no filler words. xx
Pandit Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 5:42 PM
Glad to see that this wonderful poem was a winner..congrats, Harry.
Papyrus Avatar
August 3, 2019 at 2:59 PM
Amazing and gritty. Excellent carpentry poetics... You built this perfectly!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Wonderful! Love the two verse opener! Great job in using the titles!
Sietesantos Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 9:35 AM
Dear Harry, I can see why this magnificent piece stole the show! You creatively blended these titles in a cohesive and comprehensive manner to form a masterpiece! Wonderfully written! Congratulations on your top win! Hugs and love. Pandita
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:54 AM
This spectacular poem deserves the spotlight Harry! Bravo!!! Congratulations on your wonderful win! : ) xxoo
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:49 AM
This piece hit all the right notes. Congrats on your win and thanks for entering my contest.
Canerdy Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 8:15 AM
No wonder this one placed first. CONGRATS, Harry! Janice
May Avatar
August 2, 2019 at 5:49 AM
Congrats on a great win Harry..
Roper Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 11:05 PM
Congratulations , Harry, and I am so honored you picked on of my titles. So many good titles and popets. Hugs
Mcferran Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 10:14 PM
Wow, very intense and evocative poem... and no filler words?! BRAVO! Congrats on your well-deserved win... this is a truly terrific piece! ;)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 8:36 PM
Congratulations on a great job and a deserving first placement. The flow is terrific and it is clear this took a lot of work.
Messina Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Great job on this Harry. Congrats on your 1st place win.
Gauthier Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win, Harry. Awesome poem.
Mcgee Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 4:58 PM
You must have looked over many titles...and found a sublime selection for a fabulous poem. Congratulations on your 1st place.
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 4:58 PM
dropping back with my congrats Harry:-) hugs jan xx
Hamilton Avatar
August 1, 2019 at 3:34 PM
Congrats Harry on a great win, honored you used one of my titles!
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