Laura Leiser Poet Free verse

Brotherly

His face, deeply imprinted from youth
he and I, two souls knit by our pasts
oh so different, yet brotherly are we.

How we laugh, recalling our adventures
his Laurel foibles to my Hardy ways.
Familiar as wearing well worn coats
our voices and friendly pats resonate
two intrinsic souls woven together, forever.







Written on 4/13/2019

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Ralph Sergi May 8, 2019 at 6:49 PM Coming from the city of Brotherly Love, I can readily agree the way you captured two partners . Well done, Laura! Laura Leiser June 27, 2019 at 9:01 PM Thank you, Ralph! :)

Gershon Wolf May 5, 2019 at 1:20 PM Gosh, has friendship ever been better than this? Has it every been described better? A FAVE for me, Laura. Best wishes, Gershon Laura Leiser June 27, 2019 at 9:02 PM Thanks so much, Gershon! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen April 25, 2019 at 11:25 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Laura Leiser June 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Connie Marcum Wong April 24, 2019 at 3:36 PM I love your entry Laura. Congratulations on your great placement! xxoo Laura Leiser June 27, 2019 at 9:03 PM Thank you, Connie! :)

Eve Roper April 23, 2019 at 7:33 PM Laura ,congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Free verse of the two old man sitting on the park bench! Hugs Eve ~`* Laura Leiser April 23, 2019 at 10:15 PM Thanks, Eve!

Andrew Fairchild April 18, 2019 at 11:04 PM I love that! Reminds me of two friends who just fit, who can just pick up right where they left off, when meeting again for the first time in years! Laura Leiser April 23, 2019 at 10:15 PM Thank you, Andrew!

Mystic Rose Rose April 13, 2019 at 10:43 PM How intricate the love of two. winning wishes dear Laura Laura Leiser April 14, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank you, Pixie! :)

David Mchattie April 13, 2019 at 6:06 PM Lovely poem. Love the Laurel and Hardy reference. Have a great day. Laura Leiser April 13, 2019 at 7:04 PM Thanks, David! I appreciate your comments. :)

Nette Onclaud April 13, 2019 at 3:35 PM true friendship transcends time... love the laurel and hardy reference and flowing phrases... huggs, laura Laura Leiser April 13, 2019 at 4:28 PM Thanks so much, Nette! :)