Brotherly

His face, deeply imprinted from youth he and I, two souls knit by our pasts oh so different, yet brotherly are we. How we laugh, recalling our adventures his Laurel foibles to my Hardy ways. Familiar as wearing well worn coats our voices and friendly pats resonate two intrinsic souls woven together, forever. Written on 4/13/2019

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 5/8/2019 6:49:00 PM

Coming from the city of Brotherly Love, I can readily agree the way you captured two partners . Well done, Laura!

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2019 9:01:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph! :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/5/2019 1:20:00 PM

Gosh, has friendship ever been better than this? Has it every been described better? A FAVE for me, Laura. Best wishes, Gershon

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2019 9:02:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2019 11:25:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2019 3:36:00 PM

I love your entry Laura. Congratulations on your great placement! xxoo

Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2019 7:33:00 PM

Laura ,congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Free verse of the two old man sitting on the park bench! Hugs Eve ~`*

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/23/2019 10:15:00 PM

Thanks, Eve!

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 4/18/2019 11:04:00 PM

I love that! Reminds me of two friends who just fit, who can just pick up right where they left off, when meeting again for the first time in years!

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/23/2019 10:15:00 PM

Thank you, Andrew!