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Brother Bother

The brother of my mother's father Together better never gather; But when the mother boldly bothers To get together both of brothers, The bother bides upon the mother, That bets that she would never bother To bind the ties between the brothers Who’re rather bound to kill each other. January 12, 2020
Contest: Tongue Twister Sponsored by: Nina Parmenter

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Date: 1/23/2020 8:03:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/23/2020 7:29:00 PM
Well done, margarita! Congrats on your win
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Date: 1/22/2020 5:13:00 PM
Back to say congrats, Margarita, nicely done. Hugs, John
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Date: 1/21/2020 7:31:00 PM
Sounds like my family. LOL Well done, Margarita. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/21/2020 5:37:00 PM
Bother and brother, nice pairing, well done.
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Date: 1/21/2020 4:26:00 PM
Way to go, congrats!
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Date: 1/21/2020 2:42:00 PM
Great rhythm and rhyme in this one and as well as twisting my tongue it’s actually a rather good poem! Very well deserved place Margarita - thanks for entering!
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Date: 1/13/2020 7:17:00 PM
Is the brother a bother to his twisted sister?
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/13/2020 8:08:00 PM
:)
Date: 1/13/2020 3:16:00 PM
My head is spinning after reading this one, Margarita, I'm guessing that this is for the tongue twister contest. It twisted my brain as well as my tongue. Best of luck! Hugs, John
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/13/2020 5:02:00 PM
Twist&Spin is not a bother Headache it is to have that brother :)