Paula Goldsmith Poet Acrostic

Brother

Brother you were the boy that grew into a great man.
Running cars were your joy.
Offering advice was your line.
The day you passed I was left alone.
Heaven now has one more angel.
Eternally you will be missed.
Recognized for our strong resemblance.

Date: 1/12/2020 Written
(To My Brother, Just Passed)

First Place   1/28/2020  What's In A Name Contest Judged:1/28/2020       Sponsored by: Juliet Ligon

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Eve Roper February 2, 2020 at 10:24 PM Great acrostic, Paula, beautiful tribute. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve Paula Goldsmith February 4, 2020 at 12:38 PM "Thank You" for your note. Glad you like it. Hugs back and enjoy your day...........

Line Gauthier February 1, 2020 at 7:07 AM Touching. Congrats on your winning poem, Paula. Lovely tribute. Paula Goldsmith February 1, 2020 at 11:21 AM "Thank You" very much for writing. It has been hard. Enjoy your weekend...............

Juliet Ligon January 30, 2020 at 12:27 AM This is a beautiful tribute, but I would have liked more rhythm and flow. Congrats on your placement in my contest! Paula Goldsmith January 30, 2020 at 2:16 PM Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a placement.

Jenish Somadas January 29, 2020 at 12:52 AM A great tribute.. Congrats on your placement Paula.. Paula Goldsmith January 30, 2020 at 2:14 PM "Thank You" It is wonderful to hear from other writers. Have a great day.................

Anil Deo January 20, 2020 at 7:16 PM I ditto Kai, below. As a pastor and CHRISTian, I am willing to be a little brother, and I shall pray for your solace, strength, and success. Shalom, shalom Paula Goldsmith January 21, 2020 at 1:53 PM Thank You, for writing and prayers. It has been a very hard time. Have a wonderful and blessed day......

Kai Michael Neumann January 18, 2020 at 8:18 AM I am sorry for your loss. A great tribute. Kindest wishes, Kai Paula Goldsmith January 20, 2020 at 1:08 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a good day...........

Carolyn Devonshire January 14, 2020 at 1:26 PM Paula, I'm so sorry for your loss. My brother and sister are much older than I and I don't know how I will get through the pain if I outlive them. I hope writing this beautiful poem helped you cope. My sympathies, Carolyn Paula Goldsmith January 14, 2020 at 1:51 PM "Thank You." I has been very hard. Somethings one just does not get over. I wait to see him again..........

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2020 at 10:15 AM So heartfelt Paula--your love for your brother adorns your words. Special, poem. Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2020 at 10:22 AM Thank You. The miles did not keep us away. We talked every week. Have a wonderful day writing...............

Caren Krutsinger January 12, 2020 at 9:45 PM Gorgeous write, I do believe he is smiling from heaven as he reads these words in tribute, from his beloved sister. Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2020 at 9:04 AM Glad you like it. I hope it put a smile on his face. Enjoy your day................

Line Gauthier January 12, 2020 at 9:25 PM So very sorry for your loss, Paula. Beautiful tribute. Paula Goldsmith January 13, 2020 at 9:02 AM Thank You. It has been very hard. The holidays did not help. Have a wonderful day.................