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Brother

Brother you were the boy that grew into a great man.
Running cars were your joy.
Offering advice was your line.
The day you passed I was left alone.
Heaven now has one more angel.
Eternally you will be missed.
Recognized for our strong resemblance.

Date: 1/12/2020 Written
(To My Brother, Just Passed)

First Place   1/28/2020  What's In A Name Contest Judged:1/28/2020       Sponsored by: Juliet Ligon

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Date: 2/2/2020 10:24:00 PM
Great acrostic, Paula, beautiful tribute. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/4/2020 12:38:00 PM
"Thank You" for your note. Glad you like it. Hugs back and enjoy your day...........
Date: 2/1/2020 7:07:00 AM
Touching. Congrats on your winning poem, Paula. Lovely tribute.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/1/2020 11:21:00 AM
"Thank You" very much for writing. It has been hard. Enjoy your weekend...............
Date: 1/30/2020 12:27:00 AM
This is a beautiful tribute, but I would have liked more rhythm and flow. Congrats on your placement in my contest!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2020 2:16:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a placement.
Date: 1/29/2020 12:52:00 AM
A great tribute.. Congrats on your placement Paula..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2020 2:14:00 PM
"Thank You" It is wonderful to hear from other writers. Have a great day.................
Date: 1/20/2020 7:16:00 PM
I ditto Kai, below. As a pastor and CHRISTian, I am willing to be a little brother, and I shall pray for your solace, strength, and success. Shalom, shalom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2020 1:53:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and prayers. It has been a very hard time. Have a wonderful and blessed day......
Date: 1/18/2020 8:18:00 AM
I am sorry for your loss. A great tribute. Kindest wishes, Kai
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2020 1:08:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a good day...........
Date: 1/14/2020 1:26:00 PM
Paula, I'm so sorry for your loss. My brother and sister are much older than I and I don't know how I will get through the pain if I outlive them. I hope writing this beautiful poem helped you cope. My sympathies, Carolyn
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2020 1:51:00 PM
"Thank You." I has been very hard. Somethings one just does not get over. I wait to see him again..........
Date: 1/13/2020 10:15:00 AM
So heartfelt Paula--your love for your brother adorns your words. Special, poem.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank You. The miles did not keep us away. We talked every week. Have a wonderful day writing...............
Date: 1/12/2020 9:45:00 PM
Gorgeous write, I do believe he is smiling from heaven as he reads these words in tribute, from his beloved sister.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 9:04:00 AM
Glad you like it. I hope it put a smile on his face. Enjoy your day................
Date: 1/12/2020 9:25:00 PM
So very sorry for your loss, Paula. Beautiful tribute.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 9:02:00 AM
Thank You. It has been very hard. The holidays did not help. Have a wonderful day.................