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Brother

Brother you were the boy that grew into a great man. Running cars were your joy. Offering advice was your line. The day you passed I was left alone. Heaven now has one more angel. Eternally you will be missed. Recognized for our strong resemblance. Date: 1/12/2020 Written (To My Brother, Just Passed) First Place 1/28/2020 What's In A Name Contest Judged:1/28/2020 Sponsored by: Juliet Ligon

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Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2020 10:24:00 PM

Great acrostic, Paula, beautiful tribute. Congratulations on your 1st place win. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/4/2020 12:38:00 PM

"Thank You" for your note. Glad you like it. Hugs back and enjoy your day...........

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/1/2020 7:07:00 AM

Touching. Congrats on your winning poem, Paula. Lovely tribute.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/1/2020 11:21:00 AM

"Thank You" very much for writing. It has been hard. Enjoy your weekend...............

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/30/2020 12:27:00 AM

This is a beautiful tribute, but I would have liked more rhythm and flow. Congrats on your placement in my contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2020 2:16:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a placement.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/29/2020 12:52:00 AM

A great tribute.. Congrats on your placement Paula..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/30/2020 2:14:00 PM

"Thank You" It is wonderful to hear from other writers. Have a great day.................

Anil Deo

Date: 1/20/2020 7:16:00 PM

I ditto Kai, below. As a pastor and CHRISTian, I am willing to be a little brother, and I shall pray for your solace, strength, and success. Shalom, shalom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/21/2020 1:53:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and prayers. It has been a very hard time. Have a wonderful and blessed day......

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 1/18/2020 8:18:00 AM

I am sorry for your loss. A great tribute. Kindest wishes, Kai

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2020 1:08:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. Have a good day...........

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2020 1:26:00 PM

Paula, I'm so sorry for your loss. My brother and sister are much older than I and I don't know how I will get through the pain if I outlive them. I hope writing this beautiful poem helped you cope. My sympathies, Carolyn

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2020 1:51:00 PM

"Thank You." I has been very hard. Somethings one just does not get over. I wait to see him again..........

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2020 10:15:00 AM

So heartfelt Paula--your love for your brother adorns your words. Special, poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 10:22:00 AM

Thank You. The miles did not keep us away. We talked every week. Have a wonderful day writing...............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/12/2020 9:45:00 PM

Gorgeous write, I do believe he is smiling from heaven as he reads these words in tribute, from his beloved sister.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 9:04:00 AM

Glad you like it. I hope it put a smile on his face. Enjoy your day................

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2020 9:25:00 PM

So very sorry for your loss, Paula. Beautiful tribute.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/13/2020 9:02:00 AM

Thank You. It has been very hard. The holidays did not help. Have a wonderful day.................