Gregory Richard Barden Poet Tetractys

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Brooklyn Bound

White ...

frost-clad

cabled vaults -

join thoughts to sky ...

my city slumbers 'neath its cloak of snow.






~ 2nd Place ~  in the "Make It Five" Poetry Contest, Joseph May, Judge & Sponsor.

( Syllables = 1, 2, 3, 4, 10 - counted at HowManySyllables.com )

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Andrea Dietrich September 29, 2019 at 2:29 PM awesome imagery and also THOUGHT in this one, Buddy. Gregory Richard Barden October 4, 2019 at 8:51 PM Many kind thanks to you, Andrea, I so appreciate it! I will message you soon, (I owe you) ... blessings, Buddy! :o) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2019 at 2:29 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Gregory Richard Barden October 4, 2019 at 8:50 PM Thank you very much, Anne-Lise, that's very kind of you, my friend - blessings! :o) <3

Joseph May September 26, 2019 at 8:02 PM Very nicely penned Greg, Congrats on your win Gregory Richard Barden October 4, 2019 at 8:49 PM Thank you so very much, Joseph, I so greatly appreciate the kind placement and comments! Blessings! :o)